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for Survival

by fullmoon144

schedule October 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Okay moon what's going on why did u leave the chap 3 like that finish the cotton pickin story please
schedule September 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hello why u leave me hangin tell us the ending of this story
schedule February 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow, I cant wait to find out what happens next, the fact that Jaken is jealous of Miroku makes me shutter. I wonder if the baby will be a boy or a girl...please update soon!
person mamarita
schedule July 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
chapter 1 was great. Chapter 2 starts great, but gets a little muddled after Miroku finds out he is pregnant. I think that needs to be expanded just a little. Otherwise, I am really enjoying this!