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OH!! very interesting!!! i luv where ur going with this!!!
can't wait to see more!!! the plot is very original and i want more!!!

Ur-Gay-Luvr
Rocky

sound awesome please do continue!!! :)

Fasinating! Please email me when the next chapter is up! B reading U!
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oooh yay, I definately say more! lol I'm totaly getting into the story ^_~

i like it! sounds very promising. i cant wait to see how it pans out!

I love the way you began the story. It's interesting that you have Hanyous as being more impotant than both the humans and the demons. Izayoi is a real mystery as a charcter since you don't get much in the way of information on what she's like in the anime and manga, so you really have great big playing field with her. I look forward to your next up date, and don't forget to update Inuyasha PI too.

"However, where demons were considered impure, dirty and all around evil incarnated, half demons were seen as gods that walked on earth. Not only did they hold the powers of youkai, but also the spiritual powers of a human. While the coupling of a demon and human was looked down upon, the creation that would grow inside the female’s body was what mattered. Hanyous, as they were called, were the Children of the Future, the ones that would bring harmony and peace to the warring states era they were currently living in.

And one child in particular was especially valued. His name was Inuyasha, known to all throughout the lands as the young lord Inuyasha, son of Lady Izayoi, heir to his mother’s fortune and title as Ruler of the West. "

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It's a bit confusing because these 2 paragraphs imply that there are other Hanyous, then you go on to say that Inuyasha is the first.

I really like this fic. Though was Izayoi raped by Inuyasha's father? Or maybe he seduced her in order to create a half-breed child? Maybe his goal is to create a world ruled by half-demons, so demons would have a place in it too.

more please

wow! the word "hanyou" created by his mom just for him, eh? that's very different seeing how it's usually used as a deragtory term. wonder if sesshoumaru will still have his "this-sesshomaru-is-worthier-than-thou" attitude even though he's somebody's property and not free to do as he wishes. i can easily see him being a very proud demon even though he's a slave. really interrested on seeing what changes to his personality you will make. oh! and thank you for not making this an InuSess fic because even though inuyasha will have authority over sesshoumaru, i still think that sess should always be topping inuyasha. sess as an uke every now and then is sweet and all but i prefer him as a top. till next time. ja!

seems interesting so far. update soon, please.