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for Restless Sleep

by Palmerdreams

person Patty530
schedule July 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You did good hun. I think it was great. So, what happens now? Update soon.

Thanks;
Patty
person WTW
schedule July 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
^^ great job. If anyone has been keeping up with what has been really happening in the manga. Kikyo really finally does die and from it you can't help but feel sad for her and Inu at that point how its actually done. ^^; Sorry to burst anyones bubble. XD

But you did well hun. After all you are the author and what you say goes. =3 Keep it up.
person Afrieal
schedule July 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ooOOOOOOoooo the clay pot arrives on the scene Great Job now to call Affie (my turn on the review button tonight) Thanks for the great work so far and please keep up the great work... if you get any flames put the tea kettle on them and brew some nice tea for iced or a regular cuppa *smile*
Rysha and Affie
person WTW
schedule July 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oo0oo0oh! Confrantation! Can't wait to see what Kikyo has to say and what Inu and Kag do next. Keep it up. your doing well.
person Patty530
schedule July 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Very good. I like where I think this is going. And even if it doesent go my way, it's going to be good. I like how you brought Inuyasha and Kagome together, no hysterics no angst. And I like how Inuyasha didn't have second thoughts when Kikyo appeared. Good job.

Thanks,
Patty
person Afrieal
schedule July 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Okay now i'm risking my boss being really ticked off he let me use my break to review one story and i've ended up reviewing several but darnit everyone i've reviewed today has done so well i can't wait to see what else you come up with... if you don't mind the suggestion maybe find out a little about empathic bonding if you havn't already i've actually seen humans show signs of it (twins actually) and it sounds like what you're aiming for

Please keep up the great work my partner in crime Rysh called me during my last break tonight to get me to read the update and said it was GREAT and is looking foreward to more as well

Affie and Rysha
eek here comes the boss
schedule July 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Keep writing! What happens next?
person Patty530
schedule July 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter. Keep it up. Update soon.

Loved it.

Patty
person WTW
schedule July 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Awe, such a meanie author... To leave your readers hanging, lol. Good job! Love what your doing hun. Short but sweet chapters. Keep it up please!!!
person Patty530
schedule July 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really liked it. It's a great start. Please keep it up.

Thank you,
Patty