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for Black Widow Miko

by madmiko

person Dark_Rose_of_chaos
schedule September 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh my, if anyone knows how to fuck something up its Heie. If anyone knows how to feel extremely guilty for someone else fucking it up its Kagome. If anyone knows how to make a situation worse its Kurama! What is going to happen! Only the Kamis know but I am willing to bet that Kurama is going to walk out of this one short one testical. Please update soon!
person river
schedule September 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh HURRAY for long chapters that require snacks and beverages!!! Those poor manly men and their inability to interface with their emotional responses in a rational manner.

And, if Ayame had her heart ripped out, wouldn't she end up in the Reikai? Wake up, you binky-sucking toddler... do you think your team might need that information? Or does Yemon know how to trap souls? It is so complex... a plan within a plan within a plan... now I will spend the next week obsessively checking for the next update ^_^;;
person hmm___oo
schedule September 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
for some reason i really hate youko kurama in this story..i want to stab him with his own..tool o_O
person YIN-YANG
schedule September 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
NNNNNOOOOOOOooo!!!!!! dont go to kurama dont do it plz plz plz plz plz plz plz!!!!!!!


plz update soon:)
person Timmy22
schedule September 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Love this story and one of the best i've read. The storyline is great but the details are what makes one of the best. Can't wait for more to come and am looking forward to it. Kuruma and Kagome should't have all out sex though because she's under stress with Hiel and that braclet so it almost be like rape and we don't want that. Great job can't wait to read more.
schedule September 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
milady i bow to your creative genius. i think hiei will win but not after kagome runs him slightly insane. i know that she fears being with him might make him a target, but please tell me that he makes her see reason, and that she is not going to be sleeping with kurama at the end of the chap. that just might get kurama killed. but i can't wait for you to update. ttyl.
person Phoenix Wolf
schedule September 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
CRASH! *don't worry, that was just my jaw hitting the computer desk*

WTF!????! I ... um .... great chapter! Lots of details, and emotions! I wonder if Hiei will "accidentally" catch Kagome and Kurama, and do some damage? I shouldn't be surprised that Youko is playing underhanded, but Kurama? *shakes head* I am disapointed in him.

Does Hiei get to beat the @$&% out of Kurama? Can't wait for THAT!

Keep up the excellent work! 50 odd pages huh? Wicked!

Until we meet again.
person YIN-YANG
schedule September 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OH I FEEL THE LOOOOOOOVVEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!! I'M JUST ON THE EGDE OF MY SEAT WITH EVERY CHAPTER WOW! I MEAN F'N WOW! YOU KNOW WHAT I MEAN I LOVE TO READ A GOOD MYSTERY THIS IS WOW!!!



please update really soon thx!!!
person Ru-Doragon
schedule August 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Well duh it wasn't him. If I had realized it was Kagura who said that last time I probably could have even told you who it was. -looking bored- Does anybody else have this theory or is just me? Am I the ONLY ONE trying to figure this out? Seriously? If my theory is right to I get a congrats? I'll say it again, you've never denied my theory. That leads me to believe that I'm right. If it's not right please tell me now. I want to be able to come up w/ another theory before the truth is revealed if I'm wrong. Oh, and if Sess gets his arm back, that's great! I like him better w/ both arms. I just feel like he can do more when he has both. Ai ai ai. It's 12:45. I need to go to sleep soon. Know me though, it's not likly that's gonna happen. -scratchs head- So, what kind of spell does Kagura have to make her kids aura seem like Sess's huh? She has to have something now doesn't she? I mean, he's not really Sess's son now is he. I'm not real sure what the bitch and ho were fighting about, but frankly, I don't give a rats ass. At least not right now. -yawns- Shit. I'm tired. Well then. This is a great chapter. I can't wait to find out what happens next. Update soon. ^_~
This is tied w/ like, 2 others, for my favorite story on this site. Then again, I don't have nearly as many stories on this site that I do on regular FF. -srugs- Less stories here. Oh well. Probably better that way. Ja ne.
person Phoenix Wolf
schedule August 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
WOW!!! Another absolutely fantastic chapter for you!

I would like to write more, but I am so dang tired right now ... I'll save my guesses and thoeries for your next wonderful chapter.

Until we meet again.

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