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*jaw drops, hits the floor and is followed by Dark Rose* DEAR GOD!!!! I am shocked to say the least!!! He....her......them...... Please dont leave me hanging for six weeks!!!!! *cries*

*nose twitches* I am darn mad at you for THAT cliffhanger. Grr. You make me angry and start crying because I get so frustrated! I want SOMEONE to be on her side, and a hint of the facts! I want reikai to get yelled at and some pretty shamefaced Kurama! Grrr.
*kicks the computer*
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But I will concede to the awful power of the authoress.
So please update soon!

Holy frinkin crap! I read ALL the chapters in one full day! and I have to say, OMG!!! THIS STORY IS FRINKIN AMAZING! PLZ don't have her sleep with kurama! (wow. normally its the other way around. since I usually like kur/kag, but I CAN'T SEE KAGOME or HIEI IN MORE GREIF!) have hiei storm in there and claim "his woman"!!! if you have any list that you update alert plz put me on the list!!!!

This is the second story I have read written by you. I do have to say that you do a wonderful job. This story is great. The descriptions you use of objects and feelings make me see and feel what you are portraying. I am definitely looking forward to the next chapter of this story.

oooh im dyong to find out what happens! please update soon

All right, madmiko, I've been a bum. I swear I'm going to try to start writing reviews. But you have to keep writing this story! You've left me hanging forever this time! Do you want me to say I love it? I love it! Do you want me to say it's great? It's great! Do you want me to beg? Please, please write some more! Did it work?

Your Evil. Damn your cliffhanger!At least thats what i see the ending as. I spent ALL DAY yesterday reading your story which was brought to my attention by my good buddy Legilmyth(Also an author here)and then almost 4 hours tonight to finish it. You are an absolutly fabulous author. I love the details you give and you have the characters attitudes perfectly! I love the humor you have added to break up the parts dealing with the more "serious" and emotional parts. I am anxiously awaiting for you to update. Which i hope shall be soon. This in one of the very few fics i have been able to enjoy in quite some time. keep up the good work.
Corbie

I don't know how I keep managing to miss your updates, but I do! I even look for the story, and still miss them.

I liked this last chapter quite a bit. Hiei's surety of what 'will' happen, combined with his deeply held worry over rejection that comes out at that one crucial moment were very nicely done. I was completely carried along with the story. Laughed over how the sons deal with each other and the 'free for all,' and I am looking forward to, I hope, Kurama getting his ass completely handed to him by Hiei. I am also hoping that my sad, pathetic inability to catch up to the updates means that I get to see the next one before too much longer.

Oh, re: the blowjob. Once again, I am enjoying your sexual creativity for Kagome and Hiei. It's nicely done, different, very smooth style that gives enough physical description that it's very erotic, but enough emotional and mental 'stuff' is in there to feed my own love of the romance of it all. I can hardly wait for next chapter!

And sorry this one was a bitch to write, but as a reader, even waiting almost 2 weeks longer due to personal dumbassitude, it was STILL worth it.

I'm just about ready to kill you right now. You know that right? Thank's for telling me that I'm wrong though. I'm guessing that in the next chapter Kurama's gonna open that box and that's where all the clues are gonna come from am I right? Well I guess I'll find out next update. Sorry I didn't read this earlier. I've become obssed w/ FMA. Riza and Roy you know. Such a perfect pairing. Anyway. OF COURSE I'LL BE STAYING TO FIND OUT WHAT HAPPENS! You really think that I would stay w/ this so long and then just LEAVE!?! Are you crazy?! Not gonna happen! -completly serious- Know that if you don't finish this I WILL find you and make you finish it. Finishing this story is NOT and option for you. It's gonna happen. Anyway. -pauses- Again. I can't think of anything for the poison right now and I have to go get ready for work so I'll have to think about it later. If we don't find out about the poison in the next chapter hopefully I'll be able to get another theory from it. If I think of something else before then I'll leave another review telling you what it is. Probably anyway. If I remember to do that. I might not. Anyway hurry up and get Hiei and Kagome back together. You are going to get so much flame for that. Or at least almost everyone comenting about it. This is a really great chapter. I can't wait to find out what happens next. Update soon. ^_~

I think this might have been the longest chapter yet. Keep it up. I love this story.

I just went and looked at the other reviews. Silly me. How could I forget.


-takes deep breath- WHAT THE HELL ARE YOU THINKING SENDING HER TO KURAMA!?!?!?! WELL!?! Based on what he said I don't think that it could really be anyone else. Just make sure that she says no okay? You will be in BIG TROUBLE if she doesn't. Honestly, I would consider that rape. Kurama's forcing her, even if she doesn't know it, to do something that she doesn't want to do. Still thinking about that poison thing.

-looks at clock- AHHH! WORK! Must get ready! -suddenly calm- Damn. I hate working. I only like it b/c I get paied. I like money. Even if I don't get to keep it all for me to spend on whatever I want. Must get ready now!