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If by 'shoot everything to hell' you meant did you just reveal everything, then yes. Pretty much. I'm gonna go w/ her being as pure as she is, when she gets pregant the demon and pure in her fight and cause some kind of conflit inside her that she can't control. So she loses control of her powers and body movements. And since her mates would never leave her when she was like that, let alone attack her, they were completly defenseless.
Which means she DID kill her other mates didn't she? That's sad. It really is. But I don't see how they can really blame her when it wasn't something that she had any control over. I would call it manslaughter. Did you ever notice how that sounds so much worse than murder?
So when are the others going to hear the commotion and come running? Or is the barrier still up and preventing that? Either way their gonna find out about Hiei and Kagome soon. Especially since she's pregant now. The boys will be thrilled about that though b/c it's a foolproof way to keep her out of the fighting. She would never do anything to put any of her children in danger. Either way, just don't let her hurt Hiei too badly okay? And make sure that she doesn't hurt anyone else or herself. That wouldn't be good at all would it now. The others are gonna find out at least part of what's been going on in the next chapter aren't they? -suddenly sits up really straight and beaming w/ happiness- And that means that hopefully we'll learn some new and intresting facts in the next chapter too! -shoulders sag- But we still have to wait don't we. -sighs- Oh well. I guess I can wait. -crinkles nose- I really don't want to work today but I really don't have a choice. And I know this has absoutly nothing to do w/ anything I just had to say it. I just don't want to work from 2-10:30. I can only hope that I get off early. -sighs-
I took quite a while to read and review for this after it was posted didn't I? Sorry, got a little sidetracked w/ regular FF. I'm just glad I caught it before the next update. This is a really great chaper. I can't wait to find out what happens next. Update soon. ^_~

One more thing. What's a baboo? What did you mean by that cause I'm totally confused. And yhippie! Kinky-ho's dead and there are cute little adorable babies on the way!

Thank you so much for your latest chapter! It was thoroughly enjoyable. I ended up indulging myself in reading the whole thing over. This resulted in several things: 1. eye strain. Meh, nothing new. 2. I forgot about dinner. Oops. 3. that term paper I was supposed to write got forgotten. Tch, there’s still time.
Seriously though, it is a great pleasure to read a story written with such skill and creativity. The citrus is nice too! This is, in fact, my first review. By my very nature I usually keep my thoughts to myself and greatly admire those who have the gumption to publish theirs for everyone to see. I felt your story was worth an exception though. Thanks again for the wonderful chapter.

Thank you! That was a great chapter! So much to love in it. I really liked it when Hiei tried to comfort her. He seemed so uncomfortable, but determined. Kikyou's dead! Three cheers! Kuwabara saw the string, now I wonder what he's going to say about it? Hiei was so smug when he realized she was pregnant. "Gotcha!" But what a wicked cliffhanger! So, does this mean Kagome DID kill her mates? So many questions! Can't wait to find out all the answers!

ARRRRRGGGGGGGHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!! this had to be one of the worst cliff hangers ever! I was sooo excited to see another update and it was soooo good and then the cliff hanger. sigh. but i can't stay mad at you for it. I just can't your too good. Instead you've got my mind bustling with the possibilities of what direction you are goin to take the story. i must admit i had a sneaking suspicion that Kagome was behind the murders although not willingly. I got that about half way through the story. i wait in eagar (is that how you spell that?)anticipation for the next chapter.
Corbie

Ok its about time!!!! Man is seems like forever since you last updated! And this chapter was awesome by the way! Loved it! hate clifhangers though, because its so hard to wait for the next chapter. Very interesting with the son's feeling stronger when they are in the demon side. I wonder if they will be spending more time and some training there now?? Can't wait for the next instalment! Update soon!!!

OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO Please update as soon as you can. I can't wait to see why she's fighting him.

wow this chapter had me on the egde of my seat.
Kagome! twins! OMG! I have nothing more to say but WOW
an you kill me with the cliff-hangers but its awsome Ya :D

YAY!!!! Oh i love you. Shes pregnant...with TWINS!!! AHHHH...Ok now back to reality...i am sooo confused. Does something take over her when she is pregnant? Don't let her kill HIEI. I don't think she wanted to kill her mates...but could it be that she absorbed Naraku? and he comes out? So confused....PLEASE UPDATE!*Puppy eyes* PWEEEEEASE????

AH!!! WHAT??!!! HOW COULD YOU DO THAT??!!!! AH!!!! I want to say more, but I'm stuck on what just happened!!!