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March 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
oh boy... i cant wait to find out what happens next, with our little couple..
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March 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wow this took me awhile to read, but I couldn't write any comment on the story until I reached the most recent chapter. I have to say this is what I've been looking for in a story...your chapters are very long. It takes me at least an hour or two to read just one chapter! lol, I do enjoy that, makes it more enjoyable what you get to read so much of a good story...lol and you still leave it with a cliffhanger. I can't wait for the next chapter, I hope it will be soon. I'll be keeping an eye out for it (after all I gotta know Kagome's response to his question) Keep up the awesome work
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February 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow. YOU FINALY UPDATED!!!!!! I used to check this story on a daily basis, now its kinda faded to a weekly basis and when I saw the 'next chapter' button, I thought that I had momentarily lost it XD It took me about an hour to read this chapter, which makes me happy as I really have nothing better to do with this being a saturday, but anywho, I love how long it was! I loved getting the information from Kagome, that really helped me see what was going on and stuff, GAH! I dont know where my mind is taking me right now! My apologies! When Hei asked Kagome to marry him...... I squeed (a mixture between screaming and saying cute in a high pitched voice.) I had not expected him to do that! I eagerly await your next chapter!
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February 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I was surprised and delighted to see a new chapter up for this story. I was so caught up in reading it that I almost burned dinner. *Extra crispy garlic bread anyone?* I loved this whole chapter. I was a little surprised to find out the results of the aura paternity test. Now I just wonder if there was a scheme or if Shesshoumaru really did cheat on Kagome. If Naraku was still alive I would blame it on him. :) No worries about taking a long time to ad this chapter. Sometimes writing takes a while, then there is the whole editing thing to do, not to mention family disasters. *hug for you* I am looking forward to the next chapter. Have a great day and smile.
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February 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OOoo! I want to be mad at you since you took so long, but I LOVE THE LONG, INCREDIBILE AWESOME CHAPTER!! the plot just gets thicker and thicker! I just love how long you make the chapter, but UPDATE QUICKER THIS TIME! I need to find out the whole plot! Kagura's son IS SESHOUMARU'S!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!?????? WHAT??!! the only way that I could think its possible if kagura was in the plot some how and they were able to get something from sesshy when he was being killed. Are you going to give the FULL story on each of their deaths in the chapters to come?? And PLZ PLZ say that their souls were not purified!!! Kagome should be able to say goodbye, and hehe I wanna see those three give death threat warnings to hiei to take care of her!! hehehe
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February 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You are a genius...i am crying. that was a beautiful ending. i think that kagura pulled some kind of trick but i trust you to keep us informed. Yay Hiei proposed....so beautiful. i completly understand that you were sick and such. please update again soon. and did i mention you were a genius? yes ok.
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February 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh nicely done! I very much enjoyed all the attention to detail, and the writing was enjoyable and hot and touching, as always!
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January 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
im positively hooked on this fic. but you havent updated =( please update soon, im dying to know what's gonna happen next!
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January 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i hope you are ok. i have reread this story three times and each time i read it i want to read it again. i really hope you update soon. and can't wait to find out why kagome attacked hiei...i don't think he is dead though. the eye color change indicates that you have a reason for the attack. please please please update. much love.
lisa
lisa
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November 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ok. now I'm a little more composed from the last review I left. Is naraku gonna be in any part of this story? (is he possesing kagome?) Does the deathof her mates have anything to do with her celestial powers? Did she purposly strike hiei? or did her powers lash out? Is hiei unconscious? Are the others going to be alerted? Do her sons know? AHHHHHH!!!! YOU HAVE TO UPDATE WITH HER STORY!!!!