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for Black Widow Miko

by madmiko

schedule July 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wow you are a great writer. but can i guess at who did it? i think it was kikyo, because the souls weren't found and kikyo has soul stealers. but this is still a fantastic story. can't wait for the update. much love.
person Phoenix Wolf
schedule July 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hot DAMN!! *fans self* I think I will be needing a cold shower once I am done writting this! I loved his one word answer! So ... succint(sp?) and to the point. And after .... whew! *turns A/C on high*

Well, at least they learned about how Sesshomaru was found. But how do they know it was his blood under her fingernails? Didn't Jaken say there was no markings on his body except for where the dagger was plunged? No mention of her blood under his claws either ... hmmmm ....

Can't wait for the next chapter to find out who is attacking Kagome and her Shisu, and who put them up to going after her! And maybe more insight to the other two "murders". ^.^

Until we meet again.
person etf_dragon
schedule July 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
DUDE...youre so awesome...i love u ;]
person Ru-Doragon
schedule July 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Damn! AGAIN! You left off at a crutical point AGAIN! This is a really great story. I love it! I can't wait to find out what happens next. Update soon. ^_~
person Sexykitsune
schedule July 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OH MY GOSH! Hiei and Kagome smex, so hot and sexy. Damn, you write them so well together. I love how Hiei is showing his "tender" side to his lover.

I really love the tension between Shippo and Youko.

The evidence is just pilling up for poor Kagome. I have faith that Hiei will prove her innocence.

Keep up the great writing.
person swasdiva
schedule July 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm a big fat liar.

I went on and on in my final review of "Hentai Bets" that I just didn't have the time to start another fabulously addictive MadMiko fic. But then I thought, maybe a peek at the first chapter won't hurt. At the end of that, with my eyes bugging out from the sheer brilliance of the plot and new characters, I figured, hey, I can make it half-way through chapter two by 10:30 eastern standard time.

It's 12:23 now, and I have to be at work tomorrow at 7 AM. My life sucks, but your fic is WOOOOONNNDDDEERRRRFUUUULLL!!!!!!!

And BTW, but I will buy you a green dress (but not a real green dress, that's cruel...*thank you Bare Naked Ladies*) just for allowing Kagome to get it on with not one, but BOTH of my favorite IY alt. pairings, not to mention throwing in a little sugary-canon Inuyasha confectionary of luv. That is one lucky bitch...uh, well...aside from the fact that they're all dead.

RIGHT! Amazing fic! I'm hooked and thus, deliriously past my bedtime!!
person szaugg
schedule July 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ooohhhhh man, what a cliffhanger for me to have to stop reading on! Cool that I missed a chapter and got to read two in a row, but now I almost wish I'd missed 2 chapters so I could find out what happens. LOL.

Very much enjoying where this is going, and the little sexual vignettes with kagome's mates are sexy and still really poignant and so bittersweet, I got kind of teary. I love how you brought out the personalities of the three guys with the pictures and the sex scenes. I could literally see each of them picking just those poses. It was lovely. So, here's hoping your muse is going utterly crazy in forcing you to write horribly massive amounts...with a little time to sleep, at least. :D

Looking forward to more!

I'm just hoping my own muse starts working again soon! Gave myself a concussion, and it seems to have rattled my muse for a bit as well. *sigh* Well, I'll still look forward to reading your next chater!
schedule July 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wow. Things are getting very interesting...very interesting indeed.

Main thing I'm waiting for is to see how the mates died. Keep it up girl!
person Phoenix Wolf
schedule July 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*jaw drops to sit in front of keyboard(really hard to type!)*

Did she just ....? And now ....? But what about ....? Will he ....?

Ugh! What a place to leave us! *claps hands* Wait until they find out about Kikyo, I still have a funny feeling that she is in the mix somewhere, and not just as Yasha's former love!

Ooooohhh .... this story ROCKS, just like your last one! Which, BTW I am re-reading. ^.^

Until we meet again.
person Carna
schedule July 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO. Thats a nice twist. Please keep updating, I really enjoy your story.