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by madmiko

person Mistress of Darkness32
schedule August 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Sesshoumaru's alive!?!? How??? Are Kouga and InuYasha alive as well? This story is the best. I love it, and I just can't quit reading it over and over again. Hope to see the next chapter out soon so I can figure out what is going on. I mean Sesshy comeing out of no where to stand up to Kagura. Not to mention is Kagura's son actually Sesshy's, or someone elses. And did Kikyo, Kagura, and Ayame have kill Kagome's mates, cause Ayame's coversation with that wolf sounds really guilty, along with things said and done by all three of the women throughout the story so far. This is just to good.
person Ru-Doragon
schedule August 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You do know that I'm going to kill you for that ending don't you? It can't be Sess that's for sure. Wait. Was there a point in the story when Inu, Sess, and Koga were all together somewhere and were watching over Kags? Since this chapter took me 2 HOURS to read I can't really remember. I didn't say they were too slow. I just said that nothing else had been revealed that we didn't already know. And you still haven't said anything about the poison in the story. When are we gonna find out about that? Not to mention you haven't told me I'm wrong so until you do I'm going w/ her leaking her powers unintentionally. Also the fact that you didn't deny it right off the bat makes me think that even more. And I never said anything about taking off the purple playtapus costume. I don't even know if he has anything on underneath. -pauses thinking- On second thought you're right. -turns to Sess- Get that damn thing off. It's AFF. Everyone here has some henti in them otherwise they wouldn't be here. -Sess staring back at me- Hn. Females are good for only one thing. -I frown and throw heavey book at Sess- Shut up or I'll go get your mom and you can deal w/ her. -turns back to review- Sorry about that. Back to the review. Of course you love Kurama. It's your story! You made him that way! And yeah. He probably is on a ton of people's shit list by now. And yes, he's defenitly on mine. He should feel honored. I don't normally have a shit list. Normally I deal w/ people right then and there if they piss me off. I don't always hold grudges well. Did you know that Sess is just a male version of his mom? Wierd. Expecially since people normally think he looks like his dad. I'm not even sure that he got his hair from his dad. It's more blue than white. A really pale blue and really long. Oh, and don't forget to have Hiei beat the crap out of Kurama. You already said that he was gonna do it. Or rather you had him say that he was gonna do it so you have to have him do it. This is a great chapter. I can't wait to find out what happens next. Update soon. ^_~
person szaugg
schedule August 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Finally, I get to review! I've been having so little time on the internet, Iget on, get the story on the page, and have to read it later on the laptop where there's no interent, and keep never getting back to review! So...reading every chapter gleefully, loving the hot sex, and the plot is fascinating, and hiei and Kagome and all the others are tons of fun and fascinating and you left us on the cliffie of doom, soooo, I'll just wait for next time! Truly, enjoying this immensely!
schedule August 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OOOOHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!! You soooo have to update soon. Like tonight or even tomorrow. you can't leave me hanging like this. It has just gotten spectacular. I thought this story was fantastic before, but now you need to be worshiped. Can I have a hug if you don't update sooner than tomorrow? Please update soon.
Celtic
schedule August 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Another great chapter from you! I am really too tired to leave you a good review right now, but I will try XD. Poor Heie, getting all confused. There is only so much a fire demon can take withought ripping out the throats of other creatures. Lol, hope you update soon.
person Anon
schedule August 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE PLEASE
person GenXGirl
schedule August 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ahhh I did! More please!!
person Phoenix Wolf
schedule August 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Damn, poor Hiei. No matter what he does now, Kagome has really gotten "under his skin".

So, Kikyo is still alive, and Kagura knew where she was ... Hmmm maybe Kikyo, kagura and Ayame did kill them, but I still don't think it was alone .... If Kagura survived Naraku's death, than it stands to reason that Kanna did as well, and she did have the mirror that sucked things into a void.

Poor Kagome, she only wanted to release some tension (and how!), and now she is starting to have vague feelings for her chosen bedmate .... hmmm .... chosen .... bedmate ..... that bite mark could be taken as a courting mark couldn't it? *wiggles eyebrows*

Ah well! Excellent chapter once again, and I can't wait to see what you have come up with next time!

Until we meet again.
person GenXGirl
schedule August 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Amazing story. Update soon! Im going crazy waiting for it!
person Ru-Doragon
schedule August 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I still think her powers leaked. You never did say what kind of poison it was. Damn. This is annoying. You didn't really tell us anything we didn't know already in this chapter. All we really learned is that Wind Bitch does in fact, have a son that is, at the moment at least, looking like he's Sess's. If he his then Sess is getting his but kicked. I even have my own personal Sess to do it for me. See, look! -points to Sess in purple playtapus costume glaring at me then says- I hate you. -me grinning- I love you to Sessy! That and the fact that Kinky-hoe is in the human world. Oh, and if that Lord Yomen keeps it up I'll send Sess to go scare him. Right after I send him to beat the crap out of Kurama for just wanting to use her and right before I send him to beat the crap out of Kurama for being so uberly, no idea where that word came from, convinced of her guilt and not even wanting to think of any other possibilties not to mention wanting to 'get her out of the way' so her son's can get their lands back. What does he not get about the fact that they would die before they would let anyone kill her?! -scowls and throws a throwing star at bulls eye w/ pic of Kurama on it- YES! DEAD CENTER! Take that you bastard! And to think, I normally like you! -turns nose up- Hhmmh! This is a great chapter. I can't wait to find out what happens next. Update soon. ^_~