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for Come Undone

by doggieearlover

person dreams-celestial
schedule November 12, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Well done, we need more people like you out here with your writing style.
person Sarah Zitter
schedule May 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love this story can you PLEASE make a sequel. I would love to know when Inuyasha and Kagome become mates and when Kikyo will die same with Naraku PLEASE. Plus can you PLEASE let Kagome become pregnant so that Inuyasha and Kagome can both be happy PLEASE. PLEASE e-mail me back at sarah.zitter@yahoo.com

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Sarah Zitter
person Sarah Zitter
schedule April 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love this one shot story. I would love it if you can do a sequel. Because I would love to when Inuyasha and Kagome are going to live together and when will Kagome get pregnant and have pups. Please e-mail me back at sarah.zitter@yahoo.com

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Sarah Zitter
schedule January 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
AWwwwwW!!!!! That was so cute!!!! And I love the little details you put in it! Let me know if you write any other shorts like this!!!
person ddy
schedule January 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i really liked this short story
person Rukhsana
schedule October 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
What can I say? Beautiful! Wonderful! Your writing style is superb! Your lemons are perfect! I loved the part about his youkai surfacing and she accepted that part of him as well. What else can I say, I'm an Inu/Kag lemon addict (reading and writing them) and this story satisfies my craving no end! Thank you.
person WTW
schedule July 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Mmmm! Yummy! I love the way you write hun. You always bring out a grand story. Keep it up!
person madmiko
schedule July 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
What can I say that I haven't said about one of your fics before? Just this: it's always a pleasure to read your take on Inuyasha and Kagome's relationship, and the way it should all play out, ... if we could only get Takahashi-san to agree. *sigh*
schedule July 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
What a fun piece!
person Patty530
schedule July 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wondeful as always. Thanks for a great read.