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for The Nature of the Beast

by ForbiddenRyu

person lara5170
schedule August 14, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I really would have liked to have read more of this. Since this second time he came to her he changed into his humanoid form (which we all know is extremely hot. I'd say he & Sessh are a close tie on the hottie scale)and I'd love to know what her reaction would be like after seeing what he really looked like (or, more accurately, with a human face & form). While it's horrifying to basically be raped by large fox in animal form, in his humanoid form it at least would have given her the option of seeing it differently, like possibly being seduced by a hot kitsune youkai, whether or not he used magic to get in her pants, she'd at least not have to be haunted by the memory or having her virginity taken by an animal. I can only speak for myself, but I believe having it happen like that with him in his animal form would bring about more of a feeling of shame than if he'd done it in his humanoid form (then, while still being upset about it happening to her under a spell, against her will would at least cause her to feel anger along with the shame &/or embarrassment).
person geasa
schedule January 6, 2011 at 12:00 AM
great story. I can see Kurama doing this to someone back in the day. I like how you used some of the folklore too
schedule March 29, 2010 at 12:00 AM
who dod you write it for? did they do a continuation? I really want to read more of this story. I wsh you could continue it.
schedule February 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wow...o________o that was certainly very ...different, but incredibly well written.
schedule September 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow! Absolutely Wow! Well written, intriguing, captivating...I think maybe Youko's spell works just as well on readers. I would like to kick Youko's butt a little bit for playing with Kagome that way, but that is a tribute to your writing, that I would feel that way. Brilliant.
person IYFG Moderator
schedule August 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Congratulations Forbidden Interludes!

One of your stories has been nominated for the 2nd Quarter 2007 by the Inuyasha FanGuild in the following category:

The Nature of the Beast for Best Crossover.

To qualify for this honor, your story needed to have had a chapter posted during January, February, or March 2007, been recommended by one of our members and then seconded by another. Voting by our members will take place during August 12th through August 25th, and the results will be announced on August 26th. If your story places among the top three, you can expect to hear from us again.

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Congratulations and good luck!

Caitriona
Moderator, IYFG
schedule July 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Maybe you can think about doing a sequal later on.
person Anon
schedule July 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Awwww I wanted more!!! If your friend does do a continuing of this story I want To know!
person MIAMax
schedule July 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I would like very much to see more of this
person Diane
schedule July 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
If whoever you wrote the one-shot for does do a side story would you please send a link or something since I for 1 would like to read it.