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October 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great story to start. Were you going to finish it? Hope so!
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September 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is a good start. Constructive wise you need to break the story up into paragraphs. It makes it harder to read when it's clumped together. SO whenever someone new is talking, having a thought or even if you're describing someone break it into a new chapter. It makes it easier to read. Other then that it's good and i can't wait to see the next chapter.
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August 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hey when are youwrite the next chapter, i hope that it will be real soon, 'cuz i really love this story.
Btw what's your e-mail address? Please respond back as soon as possible.
Btw what's your e-mail address? Please respond back as soon as possible.
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July 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Gr8 story, please update soon :) :).
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July 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
update soon....good story
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June 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Nice, no not going to flame ya, its a real good start, needs a bit of editing but other then that it's great, please update soon
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June 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Okay now I know I reviewed the story this time. So the only conclusion I can come to is that your deleting my reviews. Why?
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June 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm not gonna flame it-- its really good. I t could use a bit of beta work, but hey who couldnt? If you ever wanna try a beta hit me up and stuff! This is areally really good story
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June 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hi!
I liked this first cap please, keep updating as soon as possible...Kouga and Inuyasha are a very cute couple
Kisses and Hugs
Tina
I liked this first cap please, keep updating as soon as possible...Kouga and Inuyasha are a very cute couple
Kisses and Hugs
Tina