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for Too Much Time On Their Hands

by Vyper

person wolfluv
schedule February 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU SOOOOOO MUCH! The last two chapters were great as usual but to throw in Michael having Inu's baby that just put a huge SMILE on my face it was unexpected and just just ...... I can't discribe!

I loved the whole boardroom meeting and the phone call with Inu and Kouga! That made me laugh and still is. Poor Fluffy don't tell him I said that though. You are the BEST!!!

THANK YOU FOR UPDATING!!!
person wolfluv
schedule February 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
THANK YOU!!!

I am so loving this story and the beautiful mind that come up with it!!! Also thank you for giving Inu and Michael some much needed quality time together can't wait to read what happens next!!!

THANK YOU FOR UPDATING!!
person Vyper
schedule February 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I didn't stop because of my dear fans giving me advice. I have been busy and needed a break. Temporary writers block also became an issue even with the assistance of others. I must be inspired and now I am. I will add a lemon or lime down the trail of chapters here soon. I know that is what all of you deviants are salivating over and it will happen soon. Patience is a torment that I love to offer you since waiting is so very disturbing, but is worth it if you live all nine lives baiting your own curiosity.
person wolfluv
schedule February 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
To be honest I panicked I thought that maybe it was because of me that you might have stopped writing this story. I am happy that you've updated and that you haven't let anyone have Michael yet... I still think Inu should be his first since his time with Sess but I am not you the writer.

You write wonderfully and I truly enjoy this story and I look every day to see if you've up dated. THANK YOU FOR UPDATING.
person wolfluv
schedule January 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
LOVE HOW THAT MIND OF YOURS WORKS!!!! ALTHOUGH I THINK INU SHOULD GET FIRST CRACK AT MICHAEL NOT KOUGA BUT I'M SOOOOOOOO HAPPY THAT JACKIE AND INU ARE STILL GREAT FRIENDS. I AM TOTALLY THRILLED THAT INU GOT JUMPED BY SESS AND VISE VERSA!!!

I WOULDN'T MIND SEEING MICHAEL TRYING TO SEDUCE INU.... ALTHOUGH I SEE SESS GETTING THAT OPITION FIRST THOUGH MAYBE INU SEEING THAT MAY CAUSE A LITTLE JEALOUSY??? WHICH WILL MAKE MICHEAL HAVE TO WORK TO GET INU???? BECAUSE YOU SAID YOURSELF SESS STILL LOVES MICHAEL AND VISE VERSA BUT MICHAEL WANTS INU BECAUSE HE BARELY HAD A TASTE OF INU AND IT LOOKS LIKE MAYBE MICHAEL MAY WANT THAT INNOCENSE THAT HE ONCE SAW THAT EVEN SESS STILL SEE NOW....

THANK YOU FOR UPDATING SO QUICKLEY AGAIN!!! I LOOK FORWARD TO SEE WHAT YOUR BEAUTIFUL MIND HAS IN STORE NEXT!!!!
person wolfluv
schedule January 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
SO YOU'RE KINDA WORKING WITH ME.... BUT I'm just not seeing Jackie as Inu's Soulmate here I mean Sess was next to himself over Megan and it looks like Jackies more interested in Megan then INU ANY DAMN DAY! WHY CAN'T INU GET SOMEONE FALLING ALL OVER HIM???

And if you dress Jackie all up for this clubing thing and make INU fall in love with her that will be JUST SO WRONG ESPECIALLY WITH JACKIES FIRST WORDS BEING WHO'S THE GIRL WITH YOUR BROTHER??? EYE'S POPING OUT OF HER HEAD OVER MEGAN ONCE AGAIN!

I JUST DON'T THINK IT WOULD BE FAIR TO INU BECAUSE OF THAT WHOLE SCENE RIGHT THERE! Although I am however digging on the fact that INU feels like he will be hanging out with his BESTFRIENDS NOT ALL THREE OF HIS SOULMATES!!! I feel SESS really needs a swift kick in the ASS concerning INU he was there first and he killed him to keep him as his SOULMATE!

AH BUT I did get the feeling that SESS was a little jealous of Jackie for Inu maybe but more for MEGAN once again... I also think it's great that INU has a BEST FRIEND like Jackie that understands his relationship with the ocean I understand why she is a wolf though the whole moon and tide deal but I think INU needs to have someone other then a dog/wolf I mean come on Sess has got a Cat for his sake...

BUT I REALLY DO THANK YOU FOR MAYBE USING SOME OF WHAT I REVIEW TO YOU EVEN IF YOU DON'T I STILL LOVE THIS STORY THAT HAS NOT CHANGED AT ALL AND THANK YOU FOR UPDATING SO QUICKLY!!! YOU ROCK OUT LOUD!!!!
person wolfluv
schedule January 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
mmmmmmmmm k.... Love Hot Topic stores! I personally have two cats who's names are Yin and Yang lite girl dark boy brother and sister my son named them no less.

Any ways... Love their out fits that's great but Jackie acts a little too butch? Or maybe pushy? I get the feeling you're still trying to hook Inu and Jackie up... She's more of a true bestfriend that is really how you made her out to be at least to me.

Love the fact Sess isn't ready to share yet!!! Also the fact he keeps trying to remind himself that it is Inu's night. Also the way Inu treats Jackie she's like his kid sister and I like that part of it too!

I was sort of surprize that Sess didnt' throw Inu over his shoulder in stead of Megan but it was a sight to imagine non the less! I love Kouga and Inu storys just like I love Sess and Inu storys.

I enjoy your storys because they are truly unique because you've incorperated the whole fam damnly! hehe hee....

But I truly hope Inu finds some one else besides Jackie as a female soulmate! Yeah shes loud shes out there and wild n all but that's what you choose for a best friend but again this is just my opinion. I know I know it sounds like I can't stand the girl but I just have trouble seeing her as anything else.

I look forward to your next update! I'd really like to see Sess and Inu do some erotic dancing on the floor though.... I mean who wouldn't??? I'm sure that you might have Megan and Jackie doing the same too... Or maybe Kouga and Inu just to get under Sess's skin a little bit ne?
person wolfluv
schedule January 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM

I SWEAR I READ THIS CHAPTER BUT AFTER REVIEWING I RE-READ IT AND FOUND YOU GAVE ME HOPE!!!!

"I DOUBT THAT SESS" WHEN SESS TELLS JACKIE SHE CAN'T STEAL INU FROM HIM YEAAAAAAAAAAA!!!!!!!!!!!! HAPPY DANCE HAPPY DANCE!!!! THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU!!!

just had to throw that in... hehe hee!!
person wolfluv
schedule January 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
THANK YOU FOR THE UPDATE!!! I am just a little disappointed that Sess and Inu are not true SOULMATES!!! I believe they are though! I just think Megan and Sess are being selfish brats! I miss the way the brothers were in the begining! I don't think it's fair Megan came inbetween them like she has. I just hope Inu gets a female soulmate that reminds Sess who his true soulmate is!

I'd love to see Inu with a native american woman! They are hard to find nowa days! Maybe have her be a bear demon??? Although I still think he should get a dragon demon soulmate! That would really piss Sess off! I'm tired of Megan being the main attention I hardly ever see Inu getting any as of late! Well that is until this chapter!

Maybe have some serious angst at the club where Sess and Megan really ignor Inu to the point he leaves without telling them since Megan took off and Sess left to find her without Inu leaving him abandond and alone for quite a while. Maybe even have Inu over hear Sess and Megan talking about how maybe Inu isn't there soulmate anymore...

Because Sess and Megan are fighting because Megan wants more of Sess to herself because she's feeling trapped even more now... Then changes her mind and Inu doesn't get to hear that part and have Sess maybe agree because he want's to make Megan happy??? While deep inside this is tearing Sess apart?

Have Inu go on a soul searching quest? Maybe he ends up on a reservation? Sorry I didn't mean to get carried away!


GREAT STORY ANY WAYS!!!!

person wolfluv
schedule January 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
WOW!!! I almost didn't read this story because of the title but I LOVE THIS STORY!!!!

Question though will Inu meet his soulmate??? I mean in the story you said Inu put a spell on himself as well as Sess to find their female mates and Megan isn't totally into Inu. I think it would be cool if Inu found a dragon mate!!! I think then Megan might have some competition! To me that might put her in her place a little....

I think if Inu ran away because Megan didn't love him as much as he does her and finds his female soulmate that would really make the story better in my opinion. But you are the writer and I love the way your mind thought this whole story up! You should get an award for the uniqueness of this story but once again that is just my opinion. I can't wait to see what happens next! This is like a soap opera you have made me laugh and cry just reading this story! I am sure I am not the only one either!

Great Job!!!!! till next time...