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BronxWench,

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..... ok three words BEST ******* STORY EVER (the stars don't count as a word but you know what i mean) your way of descibing naruku with "You know we hate you yet you still bring us back... are you that desperate for company" line from bankotsu was AWESOME its the perfect description of what Naraku is after... the ninja girl i already love. great name creat story... needs alittle more of a description but hey i only read the first chapter i'll read the rest and review each one.

Anime fangirl rates!
9 pocky sticks out of 10

Thanks for the review. It is appreciated. I had fun writing this one. My favorite part is Miroku getting all excited about being killed by the beautiful ninja. That cracks me up still that I thought of it. Miroku is one of my favorite characters. I love messing with him. Miroku is like the brother I always wanted.
Sesshoumaru of course is my love. I love that man. Inuyasha is adorable, but he is a baby in my eyes. Sesshoumaru is a real man and some days I think the world is lacking of real men. I love my husband, don't get my wrong, but I tell you if Sesshoumaru were here my husband might have a true rival on his hands. Then the fur would really be flying.
I am still kind of messing with a lot of these stories. Some of these I am done with and I just don't wish to keep correcting stuff so this is one of them. It is kind of one of those take it as it is since you should get the gist of it. Hope to get more reviews later.
Thanks as always to my readers. I would have no fun at all without you taking the time to read this crazy stuff I write. Please if you have time leave a review or at least vote. I like to know how I am doing ok?

I LOVE IT MORE i really enjoy reading back ground stories of the other characters and i can see you love sesshoumaru with his very definate role hehe the bachlor nice touch.

I review this
10 pocky sticks out of 10

in this i enjoied how much Naraku seems to be the sweet loving man when we all know hes a bastard beyond limits. I also congradulate you on your use OF PROPER ENGLISH not slang and confuzing as other stories and your very descriptive so i can picture the characters and the actions in my head.... yes every scene hmm yes little pervert i am hehe

I review this
11 pocky sticks out of 10

hmm not the ending i was expecting but still i very much enjoied this story, sex, love, angst and INUYASHA what a great mix. I must go check out the rest of your stories and if you are wondering. "why am I reviewing each chapter at the same time." is because i printed it off so when the power came by not long ago i wasn't stuck with out the story. I'm putting this story in my faves (i don't know how to use this site i signed up to reviwe people) and also i must write something... it is hard so im gunna stick with the straite and yuri couples.

Final review for this story
10 POCKY STICKS OUT OF 10 AND WRITE MORE woot woot!