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schedule August 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
very very very good =D
schedule August 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hey lol this is a awsome story I love it alot and I'm looking forward to the next update I just can't wait. A very good story line and everything Sesshoumaru and Kagome really should be together anyways lol well have a nice day =D
schedule August 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Omg and yeah when Kagome Said RuRu isnt gonna vist his gf and if he had a problem with that to tell him to talk to the hand his hand I feel out of my set laughing so hard that was a good one i have to say
person Crysan
schedule August 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love your updates! I hope you update really soon! I am wondering what is up with the light back in feudal era! well Update again soon! I am really looking forward to more!
person Juukai
schedule August 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hello, I am a new reviewer of yours. My short story for the day!: I stumbled across your story naught two days ago, and have been reading it non-stop ever since whenever a free moment arises where I am not under constant scrutiny from my young and innocent cousins. No offence, but not for their minor eyes. ^-^ I must say that your use of vocabulary is nothing short of amazing, and it definately adds more character to your extremely impressive writing. This story has been nothing short of an absolute JOY to read, and I'll have you know that I have become a permanent fan. I will not be so easily removed as the o-fuda goo. X3 And I love all the little quirks you added about Sesshomaru. It does make him a little cuter and more down-to-earth.

Like I said, this story simply begs to be reviewed and loved. Can't wait for the next update! I'm sure there are a few fans out there like me who don't mind the length of these last few chapter. >=D Though I'm pretty sure that they were a bitch to write.
~Juukai
schedule August 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
YAY! Two new chapters!! I have to say that Kagome's Jii-Jii is hilarious, his reaction to Sesshomaru put a stitch in my side, and when he slipped a finger across the chocolate on Sesshy's face and tasted it I was laughing so hard what I was drinking squirted out my nose. Oh and the part where Sesshy threw Kagome over his shoulder like a cave man after she told him that "Ruru wasn't gonna be able to visit his girlfriend", I almost died! ^_^ I wonder what's become of Kouga...He's probably hiding from Ayame somewhere else. I also wonder what everyone's reaction will be to Kagome coming back pregnant. I guess I'll find out in the next chapter! Can't wait!
schedule August 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
As always a beautiful story. A believable Sesshoumaru x Kagome Fic. Bravo!
person hasu86
schedule August 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
haha, so i'm reviewing on here since ASS has currently reached its maxed user limit. a wickedly hilarious chapter! i was cracking up like crazy, especially with the whole magazine scene. tsk tsk kags, shouldn't leave such naughty things lying around like that and kagome over the shoulder, and gramps and his yakuza and hojo, goodness, so many cracked out scenes in this chapter, loved it!! and the end of the chap was like a total 180! crazy crazy, damn naraku! and kag's pregnant *pumps fist into the air*!! excellent chapter, keep it up, you're doing a fantastical job so far!!
-hasu86
schedule August 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
A stimulating tale, Please continute with you exeptional writing talent!

Look forward to the next chapter!

Kaida
person Crysan
schedule August 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
May I say that I love this story and I look forward to more. I cannot wait until Gramps is given the feather. I am very curious about that... And what will be Sesshy's thoughts about the trees that Jii-chan tries so hard to care for?