rate_review Reviews

This story is great so far! Keep it coming cause I want to know what kind of youki she is also.

I'm really interested in this fanfic. I hope you get time to update frequently, because I can't wait to find out what happens next! I'm glad you are planning on making it a long one, I am so happy when I get the opportunity to read a nice, long, Sess/Kag story, especially one that is not AU. While I don't usually like Kagome turning demon, I liked the way you went about making it happen. I hope you don't giver her too many crazy super powers, or make her too different from "My Kagome", it is her sweetness, kindness, and humanity that make her such a strong, admirable character. Making Kagome into a demon takes away some of the intrinsic conflict that makes a Sess/Kag romance interesting, and a lot of the meaning of the manga and series, about valuing the differences in others. If Sesshomaru sees value and strength in Kagome, or even just loves her as he loves Rin, he's learning the lesson his father wanted him to learn. If he's just mating a female demon, I don't see much growth going on, and no tension in the plot. You also did a great job sketching out what is taking place between Inuyasha and Shippo and Kagome, without wasting a lot of time over it. Thanks for all of your talent and creativity, and taking the time to keep people like me entertained.

I love the stary!!!!!!! Keep on righting!!!!!!

this story is cute so far... stop with the short short chapters, would ya... geesh.. i wanna know what kind of miko-youkai kagome turned into... update soon please...

Your doing fine writing your story it just needs to be fleshed out a little more, that is all. if you would like help I would be glad too

aww man! soo far im digging this story..

cant wait to see what ur going to do with it.. please dont leave me hanging..

but im slightly confused about why no ones looking for her.. or what she's suppose to be, as in type of demon.. so thats all im confused on really.. but i am slowly getting addicted to this fic.. so dont stop.. PLEASE MORE FOR ME??!!??

really love it so far and would love to read more please update soon

i love it plese write more

its grat keep it up!!!!!!!!!!! updeat soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1

Awesome! More more, please