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March 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Really good story...please, update soon!
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October 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wow that was some crazy shit!!!
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October 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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August 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow, So Inu is undercover that';s differnt update soon
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August 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I Really Like Your Fic Youre Doing Awesome! And I Didnt Capitalize Evry Word On Purpose But It Does Make This Review Look Really Important. Keep Up The Good Work!
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June 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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June 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I didn't think I would love this story but I do
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June 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
WOW!!!!
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June 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Well its interesting. It started out well now I just wonder if there's going to be more to this story than coupling....I can't really see it as really as having pairings, more like sex partners( willing or not). It had a promising beginning, the adjustment period he was planning flew out the window to rape, now it seems like a PWP gone wild( and not in a good way necessarily). Just my view on it of course. A good story even a good PWP has balance in all of its elements. Is there more to this story than so far meets the eye? Your writing style is fine it just seems you jumped the gun to get to the sex in my opinion. Of course you could have meant it to be that type of story. But thats just my two cents.
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June 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ok that was good drity witch is always good
keep up the good work and update soon
TTFN
keep up the good work and update soon
TTFN