rate_review Reviews

I really liked the story.
But forgive me for my ignorece why does Naraku say kukuku?
I've seen it before in other stories but why?
Keep writing and best of luck.
Butterfly Beauty

Hi there. I am going to say that I love this story so far and that I am sorry you only have two reviews when it has been hit over 500 times. It is dispicable how lazy all the readers on this site are. I swear, I am gonna pack my bags and take a hike. But regardless, do not stop writing because you have talent and please GOD finish your other stories before beginning any others. I want to know what happens to Kagome and Sesshomaru in your story, End Only To Begin Again. I am soooo disappointed that you haven't posted for that in so long that I want to cry. I love your ideas and all your stories are well written, aside from a few grammatical errors now and then, but you are splitting your focus so much that you never finish a story and it is driving me crazy. It seriously makes me not want to read your stories because you continue to leave me hanging in each one.
I hope that you pick one and finish it before you move on to another. It doesn't hurt to type up a different story on your computer if it won't leave you alone, but not post it until it is either finished, or the other story you were working on is. But it is your life, so do with it what you will. I just hope I can keep enough interest in your new idea to read it, though it is unlikely because it will stay unfinished for a long time as well.

It's very good. Please post another chapter soon.

Interesting but it's so not like you chicke I'm one of you avid readers and this was seems to be rushed even though it's the first chapter it still seems not all there like you got the idea and quickly wrote it took care of errors and posted it. But I know better the second chappie will be better for sure and hopefually much longer as well I await eagerly the plot seems quite good. Update soon

Loves Arry