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June 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Okay, I think this story was written extremely well! I actually like it!
but i can't help but notice it's resembalance to a story I once read, called The Lucky Ones?
I don't know, but this story is great nonetheless! I'm liking it.
but i can't help but notice it's resembalance to a story I once read, called The Lucky Ones?
I don't know, but this story is great nonetheless! I'm liking it.
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June 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Really great story.
Cant wait to find out where you take this!
Cant wait to find out where you take this!
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June 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
a touching story. i am surprised you got so few reviews.
you have given yash a lot to think about.
i like the fact that you use the romanji terms... when i listen to an italian opera i listen to it in italian. when i watch japanese anime i watch it in japanese. many terms cannot be adequately translated so it's best to use the japanese term.
looking forward to more!
ginny
you have given yash a lot to think about.
i like the fact that you use the romanji terms... when i listen to an italian opera i listen to it in italian. when i watch japanese anime i watch it in japanese. many terms cannot be adequately translated so it's best to use the japanese term.
looking forward to more!
ginny
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June 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I agree. Very Good Story.
And hell, Kouga needed a good beating. ^^
I'm also surprised that there are so view reviews.
I'm eager to read more.
And hell, Kouga needed a good beating. ^^
I'm also surprised that there are so view reviews.
I'm eager to read more.
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June 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really, really like this story. Always wondered how Inuyasha would act around other half-demons (besides Shiori). You totally kept true to character, great descriptions, I have nothing to complain about. WRITE MORE!