rate_review Reviews

I love this story, I came across it when looking for another Inu/Kag to read. I'm a sucker for ones that involve pups. I have to admit at first I had thought of looking for another to read but once I went past the first chapter, I was hooked and did not want to call it a night until I was done. That was at 11pm it is now 3am but it was worth every moment. If it wasn't for needing sleep I wold be going to the sequel.

Your ideas for the story were excellent. Although I like Koga I do think in some ways her would act a bit better than thou towards hanyous. It is just his nature, you can feel it from both the magna and the anime. I also did not take Inu/Kag first mating as a forced act, they both did want to but both did not know what to do and add to it the demon side a Inuyasha and Sessy's help it made for one confusing first time. I think Kagome running in fear/shame might have been a bit more than her personality would have led to, however. I could see her running to Sango, her best friend/sister, to confide and tell what happen, but I would think that Sango would have tried to keep her there to find out what took place. Just my opinion, but it is your writting not mine so I respect your plot.

I also like the use of fates when Inu/Kag and Mk/S discuss Songo second pregnancy. Since this magna plays very much to fate/destiny it was a very normal thing to include.

I can't wait to read on with hopes of more pups.

Great story.Your writing style is great, thier were very few errors. I was kinda upset with Inuyasha and how rough he was the first time. Then You made him make it up to her he was so kind and caring. The only thing i have to say was a problem is you never really stated what side of the well they were one. What happen to Shippo? Did sesshomaru and kagura get to together? What happened to Rin? You left many questions unanswered. I do hope your squal is just as good as this one.

~~Sieg

very awesome story. onto the sequel!

Awwwwwwwwwww that is so mean I want to know what happens I will look for the sequel, what wil the title be?

Wonderful story dear. As a Beta I don't get out much to read any stories that other authors do. I'm very happy that I have been able to come across this story of yours and take the time out to read it. Wonderful work my dear. I hope to check out much more stories from you in the future.
Julianna

Wow. My highest reguards and compliments on this exquisite piece of work. I enjoyed the story a lot. I cannot wait for the sequal. How wrong of you though to just end the prologue like that. He looks at the stick. Could those be tears of joy? Oooooooo... Oh well. The whole condoms mess with Kami thing is kinda off kilter for Miroku, especially after using the obvulation test kit, but that is some people's views. I know of several children that are still conceived with condoms in use (yes, correctly) so whatever. Destiny will still be satisfied. LOL

I enjoyed it and am shocked that you don't have more reviews. Oh well. It was still an excellent story. One of my favorites and beautifully written.

I love how there were funny moments and WAFF-y moments and everything in between.

Kudos and chocolate chip cookies to you.

Very good Story. I'm eager to read more.

I'm happy you will make a sequel to this one.

I'm especially interested, if Minao, Izayoi and Inusouta have any kind of demonic abilities.

Well, Inu Yasha has his San kon tesou or Hijin Kessou attacks, besides of the one he has with Tessaiga.

So probably his offspring as well as Minako should have some sort of abilities too.

It took me three days to read everything but I am so glad i did. This was an awesome story. Will you write more or a sequel? I think you should because there are still some jewel shards left and inu and Kag pups don't know what a hanyou is. What about them having more pups? What will Miroku and SAngos child be? a boy or a girl or twins or triplets? Will they have thier child in the warring era or in Kagomes world? Will they have more children? how soon after thier first is born? Please write more ASAP.

Highly original. But something is bothering me, chapter 3. Why is everyone assuming the mother was human?

Chapter 6. You are awesome! I can see InuYasha holding that baby in his bad-ass stance.