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will that was no super that sesshumaru was that prince and kagome the miko i can not wait for the next chapter of the story and see if they can get that sword from hell .up date soon your write is good.

more the story is going to real good and up date soon , the story line is real good and can not wait to see what you have in strod for them.

Wow! I love this story so far. Very interesting. I can't wait for more! Your grammar and spelling is exceptional. Nicely done. Not many authors can claim the same. Well done with this first chapter and I look forward to more. If you are ever in need of a beta to check for spelling, grammar and word error mistakes, or someone to bounce ideas off of, I would gladly offer my services. My email is seren1tystar01. I hope to hear from you.
Seren1tystar01

Oooh. I like. I like very much. Your imagery is very well done. Keep it up!