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by madmiko

schedule June 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You're saying it's going to end!? *falls out of chair bawling* Oh well, as long as you write more stories I suppose I can forgive you for ending this one ;). When you put it that way, I guess that Kurama does kind of round out Youko's personallity. And to be honest, I'm not dissapointed with the way that you're writing him, you style of writing is so fantastic and the fact that he's just so pervy is apealing in it's own way.

I loved the part with Jakotsu and Kuwabara (poor guy). Keep up the great work!
schedule June 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*squeal*

yay! more Kag/Kur scenes! whoop. u made my day.

hhahahahaaha. really? well at least u caught attention of those frat boys. hahaha

aiii. poor Kuwabara. getting hit on by Jak. hahha. loved it!
schedule June 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OOOH, its getting juicy now!!! I wonder how pissed off Hei is going to be when he wakes up? *is excited for next chapter* I am begging you to update soon!
person Phoenix Wolf
schedule June 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*grins happily at new chapter*

Damn sneaky, Youkai's! I wonder who the male is who was able to walk through her barrior was? Hojo, or Muso? Oooo! I can't wait to find out the reaction of "the boys" when they discover her mark, nevermind who gets to beat that person to a bloodly pulp!!

I can't wait to read more! This story still ROCKS!!!!!

Until we meet again.
person Patty530
schedule June 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
LOVED IT! You do realize that if I keep giggling at the computer every timr you update, my family will think I've gone crazy? That's ok though, it's more than worth it. Good Job as always. So how long will it be before Kuwabara becomes a raving lunatic?
person Doyla
schedule June 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*Stares wide-eye* wHO bit Kagome?...*Groans* ..Wheres the sexy hiei when you need him?...or the charming Kurama?..*Daydreams*..I wish they where here with me!!!...^_~
person Mistriss of Mischief
schedule June 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I bet 1/2 my pay check that Hobo... er... Hojo & Musou are one and the same! And by the way... I LOVE THIS STORY!!!
Tee-Hee! Any-who, keep on writing! I await the next up-date! ^.~
person Legilmyth
schedule June 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I have to say that you have made me laugh more at these characters then I have in a long time. You have Jankatsou perfect, he has been the highlight of the story so far but I also love how you brought Shippo in. I can't wait to see how you have the boys figure out what to do. Poor Hiei, of course I'm rooting for him all the way.
schedule June 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Meep! Scary stalker dude returns! He's really creeping me out, popping up out of nowhere. This is just something to think about. I know that the way you are portraying Youko is to kind of drive the bet that they have with Hiei on, but maybe you should add a bit more of a character to him. The parts where he's calling Hiei names adds a side, but he's kind of coming off as a perverted bastard ^^'. For all that he's a master seducer, I just can't see Kagome accepting him as is...

Of course, if he remains a bastard that offers more opportunities for my beloved Hiei...
person Patty530
schedule June 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Even Sesshoumoaru bet!? LOL I can't wait to see how all this comes out. Love it.