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June 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
UGH!!! *pulls hair in frustration while stomping feet* What a place for a cliffie!! Damn, and I thought that the cliffies in my story were brutal.
I like that Hiei is getting so frustrated that he is almost ready to kill anything that gets in his way of being with Kagome. And her misunderstanding his words and Kurama's actions ... *grins maliciously* ... will the record ever be set straight with her? Will she end up accidentally purifying the poor bastard who does explain everything to her? *snicker* Can't wait for THAT confruntation.
I like that you have two villians, makes the story have more depth. Hojo is SO going to get his ass severely burned, beaten, whipped, etc! Can't wait! *rubs hands in anticipation*
Your story is just too cool! Can't wait for the next "instalment".
Until we meet again.
I like that Hiei is getting so frustrated that he is almost ready to kill anything that gets in his way of being with Kagome. And her misunderstanding his words and Kurama's actions ... *grins maliciously* ... will the record ever be set straight with her? Will she end up accidentally purifying the poor bastard who does explain everything to her? *snicker* Can't wait for THAT confruntation.
I like that you have two villians, makes the story have more depth. Hojo is SO going to get his ass severely burned, beaten, whipped, etc! Can't wait! *rubs hands in anticipation*
Your story is just too cool! Can't wait for the next "instalment".
Until we meet again.
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June 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
O.O Why!?!?!? Why did you leave off there!?!?!?!?!!?!?!???? You are evil, you know that? *mutters under breath about fanfiction leaving off where its getting real good* Well, aside from my anger issues, you did wonderfly on this chapter! Even though I think on the inside we all knew that Hojo had the gem, good work! PLEASE please please update soon! I think that I will be checking the story every five minutes >.> lol
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June 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
YOU'RE EVIL! *cackles manically* Just 3 more chapters huh. What is poor Kagome going to do when she finds out that EVERYONE knew Kurama and Hiei weren't lovers, and no one decided to correct her? So our Hiei is going to be the one to tell ole' Hojo to get bent. Oh boy can't wait for that one. Great job as always. I'm sure going to miss this when you're done.
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June 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yay! I was absolutely rolling on the floor when Hiei tried to explain that he and Kurama aren't lovers. That was just too hilarious! And I knew it, I knew it, I Knew It!! I knew Hojo had the gem!!! That skunk. I wonder what will happen if/when Kagome comes to her senses. Personally, I'm hoping that once they get the gem away from Hojo, Kagome unleashes the fury of a woman controlled on him. Now that would be a sight!
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June 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*Stares with mouth wide open*...She....said....yes.... *Cries joyishly* Yeah!! You keep him Kags...and I'lll take the other two!!!!!.....
seriously:....Love the chapter and i shall await the next one!!!.
~D~
seriously:....Love the chapter and i shall await the next one!!!.
~D~
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June 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
All I can say is Damn fine writing. I loved it. Poor poor Hiei, he just can't say anything right. Yusuke was so funny. I love how you have so many characters, yet you keep them all interesting and alive. As a writer I know how hard that is. Yes you are right, that was an evil cliff hanger. I can't wait for more. =)
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June 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oh my sweet Jesus Christ.
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at last Hiei and Kurama know. hahhaha. mistaken emotions. ah. the laughter i have given forth.
yes. this chappy made me happy. at least we know Kaggie isn't willing to give up her men so easily.
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at last Hiei and Kurama know. hahhaha. mistaken emotions. ah. the laughter i have given forth.
yes. this chappy made me happy. at least we know Kaggie isn't willing to give up her men so easily.
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June 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
~sigh~ I'm gonna miss this story when it's over... even if it is a Kagome/Hiei (biased towards kitsune). I think I figured out who has the jewel and where they're keeping it, and if the thoughts of the executives in the camp were any indication it's pretty obvious now. Anyhow, I love this story. Looking forward to the next installment!
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June 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
hahhah.
why thank you! i DID giggle and even lahled.
ahhhh. NO! dont tell me that!
but neway. great chappy.
why thank you! i DID giggle and even lahled.
ahhhh. NO! dont tell me that!
but neway. great chappy.
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June 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OH WOW! What can I say that hasn't been said? This is a great chapter! When will she tell our friend Hojo to get bent? How do you keep the twists straight? OMG I love this side of Kagome. Great Job as always.