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by madmiko

schedule July 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
yes ma'am.

so i'll review you twice.

just cuz i love this story too much.

:]
schedule July 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
AACK!!!! Your really enjoying our pain, arent you? Well, anywhoo, good work and thanks for telling me when its gonna be up so I dont get overanticipated and then angry.....again...lol
person Fub
schedule July 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I have read that many fanfics the last few itz not funny. Quite a few of them were amazingly good, but i swear this story has quickly become my all time favourite.
person Patty530
schedule July 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Our Hiei did a damn fine job on ole' Hojo. You should be proud. Now I can't wait to see what he does to Musou. That's going to be good. I know that this story is almost at an end, but I hope you've an idea for another one. You're a damn good writer, and I think most of us will be going through withdrawls.
person Shanalir
schedule July 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow! That was awesome! Not only did Hojo use the gem wrong and make Kagome see him as Hiei, but he got bloodied for it multiple times! And, yes Kagome's punch was one of the highlights for me, I loved it! I think my favorite part, though was Kagome identifying Hiei by his butt. That was just perfect! I really can't wait to see what happens next with the whole Muso situation, so I hope you can update soon!
person Doyla
schedule July 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yeah!! They are all mine now!!!....*Evil laughter*...They are mine all mine!!!!...*Ties sexy hot ass hiei & Kurama & Sesshomaru to self*...I can't leave out my sexy lord, now can i?....Muhahahahahaahahahaha

~Darkened~
schedule July 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
The thing with Hojo implanting it in his eye, I just couldn't get the image of Hiei taking great "care" in removing it... *evil grin* Anway, great chapter. You certainly know how to keep us coming back for more. I just can't wait for the next chapter.
person LadyE
schedule June 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Another great chapter! So my theory about Hojo having the gem was right afterall, I always thought those tingles that Kagome felt were suspect. And we finally meet the traitor! Can't wait til he finds out that the woman he wants and the miko are one and the same! I especially love when Hiei tried to convince Kagome he's not gay. How can you possibly mess that up? Jakotsu never fails to crack me up. Lost his virginity 5 times? lol

And yes, I never thought a Kagome/Hiei could possibly be so much fun! I'll definitely look for that next story you mentioned, but for now, can't wait to see the next chapter!
schedule June 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wha?! Damn man, didn't see that one commin'... She gonna end up stayin' with hojo or what? Likin' the story, by the way! Just wish I read it sooner, ah well! Keep it up man, and update sooN!
schedule June 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oooo, you are evil incarnate. Now you're making me wait until next time to see Hiei kick Hojo's ass! (I'm really looking forward to that part, can you tell?) And I have to ask, are you ever going to give poor Hiei a break? If I didn't know better I would have thought that he did somthing wrong in your book. Oh well. I'll wait, alibet impatiently, for the next chapter. Keep up the great work!

PS. It' would be sooo wierd if Hojo had gotten the jewel implanted in his eye or something. -__-'

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