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July 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
just had to say that i absolutely loved your story!!!!
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July 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ah, the end of the story. You know what they say, parting is such sweet sorrow. I love this story to pieces, but it had to end sometime.
As I said before, I love giving reviews for stories that I think deserve them, and this certainly is one of my favs! So you're very welcome and thanks for writing this story! You're definitely doing it right.
Hiei's thoughts during foreplay are hilarious! Send all his friends after Jakotsu? It might sound like a good idea at first... but if Jakotsu's nearly as good as he claims, he'd never hear the end of their gay love stories! And rubbing it in with a pic was just too cruel!
Sweetlips? Honeybuns? rofl And to think that Hiei was just thinking about sending everyone after lil ol' him. Clearly he's beginning to think they want him too lol! Ah... the cowboy shows... explains the comment before about jumping out the hamper wearing chaps. And he remembers Hojo's name!
Hmmm... the kama sutra eh? ~sigh~ I wish I had an eternity to try all those things too... That some nice lemon too, not to mention their lunch. After all those episodes of foreplay you did not disappoint. An interesting mix of waff and wild sex. Two gallons of chocolate ice cream! They broke the bed!?!?! No wonder Kagome's equally possessive of Hiei too...
Those hentais with their bets and comments just crack me up! And Sesshoumaru still is the all seeing eye! Poor Kuwabara will soon be corrupted to be as dirty as the rest! They just live for tormenting poor Kagome! Naraku really did get the last laugh too.
Hey that's right! Kagome did do the seducing in the end! (Seems this story is making me a Kagome/Hiei fan)
It was a great end to a great story! Rest assured I love the ending. Thanks on behalf of all your readers!
As I said before, I love giving reviews for stories that I think deserve them, and this certainly is one of my favs! So you're very welcome and thanks for writing this story! You're definitely doing it right.
Hiei's thoughts during foreplay are hilarious! Send all his friends after Jakotsu? It might sound like a good idea at first... but if Jakotsu's nearly as good as he claims, he'd never hear the end of their gay love stories! And rubbing it in with a pic was just too cruel!
Sweetlips? Honeybuns? rofl And to think that Hiei was just thinking about sending everyone after lil ol' him. Clearly he's beginning to think they want him too lol! Ah... the cowboy shows... explains the comment before about jumping out the hamper wearing chaps. And he remembers Hojo's name!
Hmmm... the kama sutra eh? ~sigh~ I wish I had an eternity to try all those things too... That some nice lemon too, not to mention their lunch. After all those episodes of foreplay you did not disappoint. An interesting mix of waff and wild sex. Two gallons of chocolate ice cream! They broke the bed!?!?! No wonder Kagome's equally possessive of Hiei too...
Those hentais with their bets and comments just crack me up! And Sesshoumaru still is the all seeing eye! Poor Kuwabara will soon be corrupted to be as dirty as the rest! They just live for tormenting poor Kagome! Naraku really did get the last laugh too.
Hey that's right! Kagome did do the seducing in the end! (Seems this story is making me a Kagome/Hiei fan)
It was a great end to a great story! Rest assured I love the ending. Thanks on behalf of all your readers!
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July 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm sorry that I didnt review the last chapter, I was out of town withough internet *cries* But that last chapter was amazing! I hope that you continue to crank out amazing stories like that!
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July 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*gigantic grin* Oh to be Kagome ... *sighs dreamily* I figured he would have the stemina, but .... they broke the bed? O.o Hot DAMN!!
Well, I will definately be checking out your new story! You have a new fan here!!
Until we meet again
Well, I will definately be checking out your new story! You have a new fan here!!
Until we meet again
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July 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
hahhahaha.
yah. i was pretty damn disappointed when the hunky fox didn't win over dear Kaggie. but it was a pretty good ending.
yah. i was pretty damn disappointed when the hunky fox didn't win over dear Kaggie. but it was a pretty good ending.
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July 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Bravo! I must say that I enjoyed this fic so much that in a way I am sad to see it finished. But you did such a fabulous job bringing it to its conclusion that I wont complain any more, I'll just have to read it over again.
I almost felt sorry for Yoko and Kurama, but then thats a fox for you, they bring it on themselves. And I loved the last chapter, all the bets was a perfect ending to this wonderful story. I look forward to your next one.
Legilmyth
I almost felt sorry for Yoko and Kurama, but then thats a fox for you, they bring it on themselves. And I loved the last chapter, all the bets was a perfect ending to this wonderful story. I look forward to your next one.
Legilmyth
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July 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Thank you Sooo much. Loved every word. Thank you for finishing it and taking all of us on a wonderful ride. I'm sad it's over but the ending was incredible.
LUV YOU AND CAN'T WAIT FOR YOUR NEXT STORY!
Patty
LUV YOU AND CAN'T WAIT FOR YOUR NEXT STORY!
Patty
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July 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I loved the story. The way you captured the spirit of the emotions was just great.
Can not wait to read the other one when you get it up.
Can not wait to read the other one when you get it up.
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July 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*Cries*...NOOOOO!!!!!...It's over!!!!!.....*Continues to cry*.....
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July 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Aw, shit, man, I thought I'd die laughing there! Wow! Don't get me wrong, the scenes were hot but, daMN, WtF!!?? Great work! I look forward to your next project!! I'll be keepin' an eye out aight? Keep it up and Take care!!