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April 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Holy Shit i just LOVE IT!! It is so awsome i could not stop reading. Its way past my bed time its like 5am. You are a very good writer. If you have other stories im make sure to read them all!!!!
Ruby
Ruby
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March 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh my God! I just read the first chaper of Hentai Bets, and you are a true genius with comedy. The group that you have put together is hilarious, and I am happily shocked that you actually put a group together without Inuyasha. Inuyasha is a great character, but I have never read a story without him being very close, if not, to the center of attention. I am eagerly waiting to see what is going to happen next, and I know I will love every minute of it. I am going to be laughing my ass off.
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December 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*brain dies*
BWAHAAHAHAHAHAHAHA! Oh gods I had my brother pounding on my door demanding to know why I was screaming in laughter and crying!! KUDOS!!
BWAHAAHAHAHAHAHAHA! Oh gods I had my brother pounding on my door demanding to know why I was screaming in laughter and crying!! KUDOS!!
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October 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really enjoyed this story. At times I was laughing so hard I tears running down my cheeks. This is one of the best cross over stories I have read. Also this is the first Yu Yu Hakusho I have read. Thanks.
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August 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh GOD, was that funny!!! Had me laughing my ass off from the beginning to the end. I never expected for kagome to develop the same fetish as miroku, that was very unexpected hahaha! But what really had me laughing was how the kept leading kagome to think that Kurama and Hiei were gay, now THAT was hilarious, i always knew kagome didn't catch on to things quickly but damn really how could she mistake their jealousy for THAT LOL!!! Anyways great story, really, you should make more like this it made my day so much better!
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August 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 7 was too funny... my favorite lines: " I must have been really bad in a former life. Oh wait. I guess I was Kikyou. Yes, that explains it."
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July 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
-burst out laughing- HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!!! THIS IS ONE OF THE FUNNIEST THINGS I'VE EVER READ! Do a sequel about the mission in the brothel or whatever it is! HAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!! I LOVE THIS! It's great! -still laughing- Seriously though, you could make a really great sequel for this. I'm sad and glad that this one is finished at the same time. I don't think I would have been able to take the waiting for the next chapter to be posted. It's so funny though! -starts laughing again- You did a really great job on this. Congrats on such a great story. I'm sure Black Widow Miko will be just as good. -still laughing- I can't wait for the next update. HAHAHA! ^_~
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July 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
EEEEYAAAAAH!! You updated the last chapter the weekend that my family had two weddings, three receptions and family visiting from out of state, and I MISSED THE UPDATE!!!! Well, at least I finally went looking for it and got to read it. I was laughing my ass off at all of the bets, and damn! those lemons were steamy! All in all, though, a great wrap up for a great story. Thank you so much for sharing it!
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July 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh sweet God of every spec of dust in this universe, I think I lost 10 pounds laughing. Seriously, you should see my svelte figure now. We could market your fanfiction to GNC and Suzanne Somers and make MILLIONS. The instant weight loss plan: laugh your fat ass right off with Madmiko's super-slimming fanfic, "Hentai Bets". It's an 3 AM infomercial waiting to happen. Just as long as Naraku flashes everyone at the end. I'd put that on my DVR. So funny I think I'm about to die.
You really did stick it to me with the Hiei/Kagome pairing...I actually, quite acutely, dig them now. They were just never in my repertoire before, but after this story, I can't stay back. I swear, you've really got the comedic talent, you know that? I mean, biff, bang, boom, every line was spot-on, perfectly delivered, every scene perfectly executed (in some cases, literally), and the characters...no one, I repeat, NO ONE has taken Naraku and made him not only hilarious, but sympathetically hilarious. I mean, he's nothing more than a loveable fratboy now, if you think about it: an arrogant, thick-headed, smooth talking flasher with a gambling problem. Oh, and he's recockulously hot. Yep, definitely a frat boy. And for some reason it really tickles my fancy that he and Miroku get along so well. It's devilishly delicious! (Hmm, that sounds like a twisted Lucky Charms jingle...hehe, I got your "Lucky charms" right here, boys...*cough*) Maybe I WILL experiment with the Naraku/Miroku/Kagome triad!! HaHA!!! Yep, I saw your review of my humble little fic, and what do you know? We've got an inside joke. The N/M/K challenge lives on!!
Okay, gotta make a brief pit-stop in the gratitude lane. To say I'm extremely enthralled and amazed that you praised my ficlet as much as you did is a severe understatement. I loved your story so much that you enjoying *my* fic means more to me than Adult Swim 7 nights a week. I love and cherish every review I get, but I know you understand when a fellow author reviews, it's something to really be giddy over. So thank you!!
But back to what matters. Seriously, I think the main thing I loved about this story was the wild but frightening believable characterizations. EVERYONE was pitch-perfect. I couldn't pick a favorite if I tried...okay, I'm lying, I obviously love Naraku's tranformation the most. Still, though, I love them all. And...I see you have a new fic posted. I don't really have the time in the next few weeks to start it, but mark my words, there WILL be more praise from the swas in the near future.
God bless you and your warped, deranged and utterly fan-freaking-phenomenally funny fic. Yikes. Say that five times fast. No really, say it!!
You really did stick it to me with the Hiei/Kagome pairing...I actually, quite acutely, dig them now. They were just never in my repertoire before, but after this story, I can't stay back. I swear, you've really got the comedic talent, you know that? I mean, biff, bang, boom, every line was spot-on, perfectly delivered, every scene perfectly executed (in some cases, literally), and the characters...no one, I repeat, NO ONE has taken Naraku and made him not only hilarious, but sympathetically hilarious. I mean, he's nothing more than a loveable fratboy now, if you think about it: an arrogant, thick-headed, smooth talking flasher with a gambling problem. Oh, and he's recockulously hot. Yep, definitely a frat boy. And for some reason it really tickles my fancy that he and Miroku get along so well. It's devilishly delicious! (Hmm, that sounds like a twisted Lucky Charms jingle...hehe, I got your "Lucky charms" right here, boys...*cough*) Maybe I WILL experiment with the Naraku/Miroku/Kagome triad!! HaHA!!! Yep, I saw your review of my humble little fic, and what do you know? We've got an inside joke. The N/M/K challenge lives on!!
Okay, gotta make a brief pit-stop in the gratitude lane. To say I'm extremely enthralled and amazed that you praised my ficlet as much as you did is a severe understatement. I loved your story so much that you enjoying *my* fic means more to me than Adult Swim 7 nights a week. I love and cherish every review I get, but I know you understand when a fellow author reviews, it's something to really be giddy over. So thank you!!
But back to what matters. Seriously, I think the main thing I loved about this story was the wild but frightening believable characterizations. EVERYONE was pitch-perfect. I couldn't pick a favorite if I tried...okay, I'm lying, I obviously love Naraku's tranformation the most. Still, though, I love them all. And...I see you have a new fic posted. I don't really have the time in the next few weeks to start it, but mark my words, there WILL be more praise from the swas in the near future.
God bless you and your warped, deranged and utterly fan-freaking-phenomenally funny fic. Yikes. Say that five times fast. No really, say it!!
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July 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I loved your story. I appreciated how you explain Inuyasha being out of the picture with him not being a total ass. Most of these crossovers Inuyasha is completely horrible to Kagome to the point you want to waste him. Yeah he was an idiot and stupid to hurt Kagome, but you explain how bad and insecure he felt. Beside it was for the best because she got the love of her life. It all works out. I hope you write a continuation to these characters. How about the gang go the cat house and Miroku find Sango's reincaration there. I am intrigue to know why you keep them apart and he is paying for his sins. You could bring in Kilara as well. I miss that fire-cat. Great story and the love scenes were smoking hot.