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June 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh my freaking crap, I can't even verbalize how much I adore this fic. Randomly, no one has ever done a Miroku/Kagome/Naraku lemon, and I think it's highly overdue. One-shot? *wiggles eyebrows* I'd write more about *this* story, but alas, I'm crazy sick right now. Just know I'm still addicted. I can't wait to read more.
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June 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
this was a really nice chapter i just love jakotsu. he's so funny .keep up the good work and remember to put a lot of Jakotsu scenes in. Oh and don't forget Naraku
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June 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
that was hilarious and Hojou is how do i say it different? I love how Kagome ended up with Miroku Naraku and Jakotsu as her especially Naraku . Keep up the good work and make sure to keep writing
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June 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
aiiii.
when is Kurama gonna get a piece of Kags? hopefully soon! jesus. i love that pairing.
when is Kurama gonna get a piece of Kags? hopefully soon! jesus. i love that pairing.
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June 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
this is a really good story it is slightly oc though , keep up the good work and don't forget to write another story after you finish this one
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May 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Please update as soon as possible!!! I LOVE this story sooooooo much!!! Thanks.
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May 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Really enjoying this. Hope you can update again soon!
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May 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ooooooo......mY......GoD!!!!!!! I HAVE A NEW OBSESSION! It's officially entitled "Hentai BETS!!!!"
While this fic is pure evil delight due to its sheer, unbridled Hi-LAR-ity, I have to say I'm quite taken with the small bits of serious introspection you've planted here and there, especially in the last scene with Hiei. I'm not normally a Hiei/Kags shipper (Kur/Kags 4 EVA! Holla!) but you've written them with more than a modicrum of believability. Frankly, it's really good. And I LOVE the love triangle. Hell, I even have some love for Naraku now! And let me take just a minute to say...
BWAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Okay, seriously? The Naraku-baboon-peepshow was the. single. most. hilarious. thing. I. have. EVER. READ.
PERIOD.
!!!!! I laughed so hard I couldn't see the computer screen. I was guffawing like a crazy bitch on illegal narcotics!!!! So funny, I peed a little...which is gross! And actually, it brought back some memories of a run in my friends and I had with a creepy old guy in a KFC parking lot...minus the baboon pelt, natch.
So anyway, all my rabbling aside, I utterly adore this story and will worship every new chapter you write. It's brill, simply and fantastically brill.
While this fic is pure evil delight due to its sheer, unbridled Hi-LAR-ity, I have to say I'm quite taken with the small bits of serious introspection you've planted here and there, especially in the last scene with Hiei. I'm not normally a Hiei/Kags shipper (Kur/Kags 4 EVA! Holla!) but you've written them with more than a modicrum of believability. Frankly, it's really good. And I LOVE the love triangle. Hell, I even have some love for Naraku now! And let me take just a minute to say...
BWAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Okay, seriously? The Naraku-baboon-peepshow was the. single. most. hilarious. thing. I. have. EVER. READ.
PERIOD.
!!!!! I laughed so hard I couldn't see the computer screen. I was guffawing like a crazy bitch on illegal narcotics!!!! So funny, I peed a little...which is gross! And actually, it brought back some memories of a run in my friends and I had with a creepy old guy in a KFC parking lot...minus the baboon pelt, natch.
So anyway, all my rabbling aside, I utterly adore this story and will worship every new chapter you write. It's brill, simply and fantastically brill.
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May 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I just have to say this story is original and highly entertaining. I love the action between the characters and adore the flashing Naraku. I hope she ends up with Hiei, but your the writer so it's your call. Keep up the good work.
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May 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i would really love this story even more if it ended with Kurama/Kagome. i loooove that pairing.
just giving u a suggestion. or more like a request. :]
just giving u a suggestion. or more like a request. :]