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by madmiko

person Shanalir
schedule June 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Still laughing my tail off over all of the twists and tangles. Oh, Hiei and Kurama (and Youko) have certainly gotten themselves in a nice little tangle, now, haven't they! And to make it even better, they don't even know it! I can't wait to see what new tortures you have in store for the next chapter.
person Shanalir
schedule June 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This just keeps getting better and better. The rivalry keeps heating up, and the extra players just make it more interesting. I kinda hope Hojo's the bad guy, since he's not often cast that way. Can't wait for more!
schedule June 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Gwah! I love it so much! Keep up the great work.
I have to say that I concur with Kagome's thinking, a threesome would probably put me in my grave. Oh well, at least I would die happy
person smexykitsune
schedule June 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I am still loving this. I like how you have Kagome interacting and defending Hojo. Keep up the great work. I'm still routing for Hiei. =)
person swasdiva
schedule June 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh sweet LORD on a rice crispie treat!!!! You did NOT just bust out a Kurama/Hiei showdown! Now you know I am a certified Kags/Kur fan, but I swear, the way you've written Kags/Hiei has me taking that pairing way more seriously. Kurama doesn't desire her with enough depth, compared to Hiei. Hiei is falling pretty hard. Still, I will shed a tear without the Kags/Kur, but I'll be okay if it winds up K/H. Oh hell, it's so damn good you could pair Kagome with the Goshinboku and I'd love it.

And randomly, I have a niggling little theory about our suddenly-suave Hojo...

Lastly, you go ahead and pick up that Miroku/Kags/Naraku glove, freak-nasty! Just keep it in your pocket for future hentai reference. ~_^
schedule June 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
woo.

i would definately want to strip sparr with Kurama. geez. loved it!
schedule June 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
HAHHAHAHHAHHAHA.

jesus. u have got me addicted to this story. i love it!
person walnut43
schedule June 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
your story is hilarious! I like the humorous dialogue among the characters. Especially, how Jakostu interacts with the other characters. I also enjoy your take on Naraku, and his obsession with Kagome. Overall, your story is just amazing! I can't wait to see where you take it from here. Till then!
person Patty530
schedule June 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I think it's great. It's laugh out loud funny. I have to admit I'm pulling for Kurama, he's my favorite Yu Yu character. Your doing a great job. Can't wait for the next chapter.
person Shanalir
schedule June 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh my god, I've been laughing my tail off this whole time, and now it's shaping up to be even better!

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