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for Playing with Youkai

by szaugg

schedule May 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Amazing! IDK but I love your one-shots....hm. Loved the semi-spanking. Lol. Keep up the great work.
schedule May 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
(nosebleed)....(that's all I can coherently say).... (O)_;O)


-DM
schedule May 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is just far too amusing for words. The idea of Sesshoumaru with the stick in his a$$ joke was funny enough to share with Hubby and he stays as far away from my dog boy fascination as physically possible. Your dialogue is always so good. You have a very unique and very compelling grasp of the characters, especially Inuyasha which truly fascinates me.

And the rimming was great. More would have been good but I'm satisfied with the rimming and fingering. Very, very hot. I'm very curious to know what Inuyasha is gonna try next in order to top his previous antics.

All in all, this is a wonderful fic even if it is just a crack!fic. In many ways it was real. The way Sesshoumaru channeled his anger toward being raped (even though he wasn't) and then the way his demeanor changed when he found out he wasn't. I especially loved Inuyasha's reaction to Sesshoumaru's protrayal of his stunt, forgetting his situation for a moment to defend himself against behaving childishly. Just another example of you writing Inuyasha in a way that captures his character better than I've ever seen.

Thank you so very, very much for putting this out there for us to enjoy,
~Silence~
person gen
schedule May 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
yes. that was certainly hot, and it certainly worked.

one thing though, wouldnt sess have known if he was violated or not?
i'm thinking he was so angry he wasnt thinking straight?
that might be the only reason he wouldnt have known
he was SO busy being mad

it worked! i just like it when sess and inu get it on....

i'm hoping you're psyching yourself to update uke....