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May 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
the story is real good and i love it and i can not beleive that kagome want to kikyo and ask her to help her. what about the guy who bit her. do he come back and will sesshumaru help her can not wait for the next chapter of the story and see what happen next. up date soon.
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May 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Well normally i do this on ASS but it's not letting me right now. Soooo does this mean Kags realizes she's a blood demon now?
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May 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh, eerie. I like it so far! Not too many random vampire fics here, and certainly none that I know of that ends up being a Sess/Kag fic. So woot to that. ^.^ I can't wait to see how our favourite dog demon fits in. ^^
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May 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
this just gets better and better with each chapter. inuyasha runs away like a little girl and sesshy finds an equal rival. action packed chapter. just great. interesting choice of mentor for kagome. really didn't see that one coming. i thought she was off to find velenor. aw well. this should give the story a hell of a twist. not to mention if inuyasha finds out. somehow i doubt he'll take it well. can't wait to see what happens. update soon.
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May 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
this is a great story! u have no clue how much i waited to read this story. i was ganna start reading it this weekend but then my internet when down, so this whole weekend i was waiting in suspence to start reading it. the summary got me hooked. im a big fan of the whole vampire-them/plot thingy.
i like the way kags would compare velenor and sessh during the most inappropriate of times!!
the only thing i would add is something to indicate a POV change. that kinda threw me off for a bit!!
well update when u can, cuz ill be waiting and so will others!!!
<3 Yenny
i like the way kags would compare velenor and sessh during the most inappropriate of times!!
the only thing i would add is something to indicate a POV change. that kinda threw me off for a bit!!
well update when u can, cuz ill be waiting and so will others!!!
<3 Yenny
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May 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great story so far can not wait until you update more!
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May 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wow, can't wait for the next chapter, Keep up the good work.
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May 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*theme from the twilight zone playing in the background* that was very intense. not to mention quite interesting. i'm really beginning to like this story. it's more different than i thought it would be. (i mean that in a good way.) the last three paragraphs were a bit confusing though. i had no idea who was saying it. at first i thought it was kagome but then i realized it couldn't be. maybe you should try putting a note in before changing points of views like that. unless it would give away the story. and i couldn't figure out if it was right when inuyasha saw kagome or before or after. still a wonderful chapter. can't wait to read the next one. keep writing and update soon.
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May 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i know how you feel about the reviews. i love it so far. i love vampires and sesshomaru and you got both in here so i'm sure i'm gonna love the rest.
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May 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely love this story so far, it's intriguing and you display a wide ranged vocabulary.
Although it would be better if more chapters were out...(hint, hint)So please do update soon!!!
P.S. Good luck with all the reviews you'll be getting soon demanding the next chapter...LoL
Although it would be better if more chapters were out...(hint, hint)So please do update soon!!!
P.S. Good luck with all the reviews you'll be getting soon demanding the next chapter...LoL