rate_review Reviews

I am enjoying the story thus far. It is wonderfully put together and well thought out so that none of the scenes are rushed or awkward. It has been a very long time since I've come across a story this well written and I am fully enjoying every moment of it. Amazing job. ^_~

I like it muchly, I look forward to more!

wow that chapter was real good and i can not wait for the next chapter of the story a see what happen next to kagome and the rest of the gang. up date soon.

i know he is evil but damn naraku is hot, that voice and looks. damn kagome she gets to see him and sesshomaru naked. she gets all the luck ha ha. can't wait to read more

hahahahaha! what an ending. interesting story indeed. keep up the good work. update soon.

You are doing a wonderful job with this story. You kept me on the edge of my seat throughout this whole chapter. I just simply love it and I do hope you continue to write some more until you are finished with it. It is a very interesting story line and I love the plot. The confrontation with Sesshoumaru and the Blood demon was very good. Now Kagome has two demons that are interesting in her and Naraku is about to meet his match. I can't wait for that part. Keep up the great work and I look forward to your next chapter.

Cindygirl

I think you have done an amazing thing with this story. It is a completely different twist to the usual same ol' plot. And don't beat yourself so much about the fact that you have so few reviews. This story actually has a storyline. From what I have noticed, the stories that have the most reviews are the ones that have at least a lemon per chapter & if that is not how you want your story to be: whatever, you are the author after all. But a lemon here & there won't kill you, you know (: I think, correct if I'm wrong, you are trying to build up your story so the lemon is credible. Anyhow, I honestly think you are a great writer with refreshing ideas! Keep the chapters coming please!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

i love the story and love the way that you have kikyo and kagome becaome friends and have kikyo tried kagome . and i love the way that you have sesshumaru smell kagome and i can not wait for the next chapter of the story and see what happen when she get back to her group and inyuasha get mad at her will i have to wait uptil you up date soon.

i love this all ready it's very interesting keeps me at the edg of my chair.

i like her encounter with kikyo. i would have thought there be a bit more violent between them. but the whole truce thing between them is still new to me, so i really dont mind.
i cant wait for when she encounters velenor!! so many things come to mind on what could happen when they meet again!!!
update sun!!!
<3 yenny