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That was rather hot... it makes me laugh though that she thought of Sesshomaru instead! Hehehe! Any ways i love this story... i can't wait until you post the next Chapter.

kurai

This is a very unique story that you have here with the vampires and the white tiger youkai and one occasionally lust crazed Sesshomaru. Velnor is pretty damn hot, and like Kagome said, at least his attitide doesn't suck. Still, I am secretly rooting for Sesshomaru to win her heart - and body. You are doing a fine job and I will check back later on to see what else you have dreamed up for us. Merry Christmas!

Wow. This story is amazing. I noticed very few spelling and grammar errors. The way you are telling this story is great. This is one of the few I have found that doesn't have any character bashing, I appreciate that. I am looking forward to your next chapter.

you need to continue this.. badly... i love this story so much that if i don't get to read another chapter... i will die.

that was good. I really wanted her to be queen too. but dammit sesshy took her aaway. im dying to know what happens, please update, pleeeeassseeee!!!

Update again soon PLEASE!!!!!!

great story so far, I hope that you continue it and update soon. Thank you for the enjoyment of your story!!!

You're not dead, Yea! Very happy you updated. I was waiting for this. What happened to not killing the demon even though he was stubborn and arrogant. Ah well, he deserved it. Sesshomaru is a sorcerer? Can he have any more power? How did he know to send the eye to Kagome? How did he know where she was? Why did he capture her at the end? What does Velenor think of this? The last scene: Drool! Kagome's so lucky. Can't wait to see what happens next. Keep writing. Waiting for the next chapter. Update soon.

Please keep writing this. I've been waiting so long for the next chappie! >.<

wow! intense chapter. a fight with inuyasha. miroku breaks up with sango. they split from the boys. things seem to heat up between velenor and kagome. looks like sango has a new love interest. and then to top it off a battle challenge for kagome. packed chapter. couldn't help picking up the vibe from underworld when you described the castle. the way you write just adds to the story plot. i love it. i wonder if inuyasha is going to find kikyo or is he going to go after kagome? an what will miroku do when he sees sango with another guy/demon? that ought to be very interesting. and the way things are heating up with kagome and velenor i don't think sesshomaru will be to happy. ah well...guess i'll just have to wait and see. can't wait to see what happens next. keep writing. update soon.