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May 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love your story. It's moving along well. I enjoy the suspense you're built. Might want to develop location and plot a bit. Keep going. I'm looking forward to the rest of it.
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May 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This isn't bad for a first fic. I have enjoyed the story so far. Since this is your first fic, you should keep this fic to no more than 7 chapters. Look forward to the next chapter.
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May 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was great you must go on I loved it.
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May 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yes I think you should continue this looks like its going to be really good... by all means please continue I don't know why Rin and Sesshomaru doesn't remember each other but I know they will soon, and I can't wait to read the next chapter
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May 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like your story its cute and funny. Keep up with the great work. Please update soon.