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for Golden Eyes

by Vyper

person LyeLye
schedule December 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i got halfway threw and it was just too slow and drawn out to bare, jaken is not a kappa by the way >.>...hes either an imp or toad youkai, and used to be a lord as well, until sesshoumaru saved him and he felt a need to repay sesshoumaru. Kappa's look extremely different and live in water and dont normally wear clothing.
schedule October 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
this is a great story, please update it soon
schedule May 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
oh i just found this story and read it all...ok i took breaks but i finished it in under 24 hours. i love it and hope you update again soon.
person Vyper
schedule June 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I have updated a lot of these pages. I will be adding much more later so I hope you are all enjoying these. They are just a bunch of Random thoughts I have made up as I go along so you know my mind is completely warped. At least I think Sesshoumaru would think so since there is no way in hell he would do half the stuff I write about. Then again I could be wrong. The demon Lord is indeed a mystery I would love to discover and will do so many times if he is up to the challenge.
person Reymond
schedule June 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Good ideas, new stuff in the lemon (chapter 1), well I like it. Thank you.
BUT you need a beta because of a lot of mistakes, and some nonsenses in the story.
Good luck !

A french mother and reader,
bonjour de la France

Merely Truth
person Diane
schedule May 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Well I like the actual story chapters, 'chapters' 3 & 4 are just weird though.