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for Golden Eyes

by Vyper

person k lave demo
schedule March 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
i swear u did that on purpose. honestly. at least u didn't bring daddy spider back but now u bring in another bug. sigh. i understand it keeps the plot going but inu just doesn't get a break. i swear something about him just atrracts people good and bad. almost tempted to say that everyone has a crush on him but that isn't reality. neways, would u be willing to converse with me reviews wise. just kinda curious. well, til ur next update. auf wiedersehen!
person Vyper
schedule March 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Have patience and faith in my writing. I don't always talk on my reviews, but I will for my fans and I wish I had more reviews to be honest, but heck as long as people are reading I am happy.

I don't want to give away any ideas that will show up all of a sudden since twists and turns make a story turn one plot into many possibilities. If you think Inuyasha is suffering, well.....let's just say he won't be the only one and without a good villian the story will end too soon.
person k lave demo
schedule March 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
awww... things didn't work out with Kagome. i hope him mating Heather doesn't cause problems later. lazy kouga shpuld have found his mate. didn't u say that elizabeth would be kouga's mate. mebe... well... please update soon! sayanora!
person k lave demo
schedule March 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
thank god he is DEAD! plz don't bring him back. i really hate it when people can't just leave him in the grave. poor sessh has gone through a lot. i think u like tormenting him. makes sense that naku would torment inuyasha the most. i swear inuyasha is probably the most sought after. til ur next update. chao!
person k lave demo
schedule March 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
wooww... poor mirage. she's got a strong character. i didn't expect u to go that far with the angst. and now naraku's back. finish him off good please. other than mirage. i really like ur character scales as well. did he bring that guy into being or is he guilty because he wasn't able to stop it in time. i really like when u do a major update. it's a shame not many others review and give an opinion.till next time. chao!
person k lave demo (fromerly known as k)
schedule February 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
wheeee! i love u.(not literally) not many people update so quickly! i liked that you introduced us to the uncles some more. I was considering requesting u to do so. poor Blades. they're som mean to him. i like the idea of sesshou having a crush oh Scales. it's interesting, imagining him following someone completely smitten when it's usually the other way around. u certainly keep me on my toes. I have no idea what to expect. i like how inuyasha will always have a special place in sesshou's heart. one suggestion, i have this idea of someone running up to Sesshou yelling FLUFFY-chan! while glomping him. of course Sesshy will be ticked if not seriously annoyed. I suggested it because i can imagine Mirage being the only one to get away with that (or crazy enough to do it. just a suggestion if u wanted to use it i think it would be hilarious. neways, til ur next update. chao!
person k
schedule February 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely love the concept of ur story. though i must be honest u do lose me at times w/ the explanations. I absolutely love ur character Mirage; she makes me laugh so hard. i realized u don't have many reviews which is a shame and thankfully grammar isn't bad. a few mistakes but nothing that takes away from reading. i agree with ur sentiments on too many sex scenes and u along w/others have corrupted me. neways, now that i've rambled, looking forwards to the next crazy update.
person Vyper
schedule February 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hello my fans. I am updating this story with some different limes and lemons to kind of move the time line up a bit slower so we can see the years I missed that Sesshoumaru, Kouga, and our poor little blind Inuyasha cope with things before I add the other chapters I removed. They will move onto the future, there will be a mating of a female to all males. This is not just M/M, it is Moresomes too, however those will come later. For now I will stick to the mainly male male script. I hope that you enjoy this since I did end it rather abruptly.
This does read a bit like a soap opera so do not be suprised if some of it does get a bit drawn out. Drama is like that and so is life. I am also writing about cartoon people's lives so they will do some boring stuff to some. If you can get through it all though this is a rather good story.
I also added a bit of a mystery suspense thriller kind of theme since I figure someone is always after the Inus to destroy them. Still, do not fear, tensaiga is still here.
Enjoy.
person nchsmi
schedule February 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
WOW! I just found this fic and it's totally awesome!!!!! Your plot is grapping and full of suspense!!!! I just love it! Is there anyway that U can send me word as to when your next updates are? If so I'm @ nchsmi8@aol.com. I would appreciate the heads up! Once again- Awesome fic.- B reading U!
person Vyper
schedule December 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I write this kind of like one of those soap opera's on TV. Ya know the guy get's his head chopped off, but he didn't really die he was just on a head hunting expedition that went wrong so now he is back although his brain shrunk even though his head is just fine so he can still be the hot guy on the show even if he is a blind deaf mute mime. Jaken is dead in my story, so does it matter anymore what he was? He is dead afterall. Not really a major part of the story, he dropped off unless I bring him to life and then I have to explain how he was brought to life and I already had to go through that with playing God with Sesshoumaru with Kouga and his problem with Inuyasha's fleas although the mutt boy only has like one of them. Am I making sense? Probably not, but that is ok. The whole thing is based off of impulsive imagination. It flows, grows, and turns into something........something.......well ya, something. That is what it turns into. So read have fun and I will keep writing. If you don't like than leave a message.....oh you did. Ok no problem, still ain't changing it. Do you how fricking long it takes to edit something? I do it a lot and I am telling you at some point I have to find a life. Otherwise........well.....that is personal question.....do I have a life......I plead the fifth. Now if any of this made sense raise your hand if not continue on with more important things other then my babbling. Good day to you all........I am going to write........rasberry jam all around.