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for I Don’t Want a Mate

by marcia

person DAZ306
schedule May 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Do i wanted her to be mad at him still. I mean mad like stop talking to him and her mom both. But it's still good.
schedule May 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i'm loving this can't wait to read more
person cocoke5
schedule May 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
love the story and can not wait for the next chapter and i love the way that kagome mother made they stay in the lock car and her brother keep locking the front doors on her to make her stay and talk to sesshurmaru and i like the way that they talk. up date soon.
schedule May 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Okay, so this particular plot is extremely played out, but aside from that, this is an extremely well written piece and I look forward to any further chapters. Your grammar is fabulous and your chapters have a nice flow to them. You have a true talent for writing. I hope you continue to update.
person GreenWolf
schedule May 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like your story so far, especially the fact that the reasons behind Sesshomaru's actions are some of the more believable ones I've read.
person bel_amour
schedule May 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i love it please update soon i cannot wait to see what happens next.
person Anon
schedule May 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OOO OOO how about kag goes through but sess cant unless he had her consent as a mate
schedule May 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You have done a fantastic job so far and I hope you keep it like that. An this story is fantastic and I can't wait to read more of it. I can't also wait to read more of your future stories, so I hope you can update asap.
schedule May 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
the ending was funny. can't wait to read more
schedule May 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
this a good begining
update soon