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for Forbidden Love

by tsikinoodango

person lara5170
schedule April 14, 2011 at 12:00 AM
this looks like it could be good. I hope it gets updated again.
schedule June 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great story line! But you know you need a beta reader so I'm extending my proofreading skills to you. Keep writing!
schedule June 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Sounds great... please keep posting more chapters. It's very well written and a excellent story.
person cocoke5
schedule June 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
more the story is real and can not wait from i love the way your writing it and some of the chapter are fun up date soon.
schedule June 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great story! Just be sure to do a spell check.
person Neptunee
schedule June 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
good story, but watch with where you put capital letters, they are placed on words that don't need them. Other then that it has a real chance at becoming a great story, going a bit to quick with the Princess Kagome thing but I will work, I can't wait to see how her working is going to work with her new problem.
schedule May 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
IIII!! I loved it! Please update sooN!
schedule May 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
its so sweet and so good i cant wait to read more please update soon TTFN
person cocoke5
schedule May 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
more i love the story and can not wait for more and see what happen next in the story . up date soon and i love the words and the said that you have and tell us what the japen words were. up date soon.
person marcia
schedule May 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You need to work on properly spacing your paragraphs, you left your italics on and there were a few typo's.

I enjoy your story and like the twist on the school. I'm looking forward to seeing the next ch to find out if Kags realized who Sess is.

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