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It was just perfect

i don't think you should change this for anyone; it's yours, your expression, your imagination and, thus, has value as it is. if someone doesn't like it then they should back out and go read something else. this comes under the heading of 'freedom of expression' and is a right guaranteed by the constitution. that covers the content. there were some errors in the text but on the whole it was well writen and, let's face it, the content was entertaining. good work. and don't sell it short.

omk.... that was good... i needed a cigarette after reading it too... lol.. atleast it was just sango walking in and finding them at the end.. if it ended up being inuyasha, all chaos would have broken loose...

+fan myself wildly+ that was HOT!!

loved it and no inu bashing while you did it. i loved the way you made her watch, i think that is totally sexy.

loved it, wow hot is all i can say

younshould deffently write another chapter this is too goood for a one shoot good job

I like it,I guess that it took eight years to find the jewel shards and to destroy Naraku along with Inuyasha to break Kagome's heart one final time.