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for Torn In Two

by LadyMinamino

person Anon
schedule May 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
good start. i like the story already. so update soon.
person madmiko
schedule May 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hmmm. Very, very interesting beginning. It looks like you cleared Yusuke's plate for a possible romance, but I'll have to hope for a Hiei/Kagome story. (Because I love that couple!) I love the whole set-up with Yusuke and Keiko, and I think his feelings make sense. How is Keiko going to get together with Yomi, I wonder, if most of this story is going to take place in the Makai? (Or is it?) And are you going to come up with a way to overcome the aging problem? I see why Yusuke and Kurama went for this assignment, but why did Hiei agree? Loved the info on Kuwabara and Yukina. I'll definitely look forward to more of this one.
schedule May 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
don't tell me that you won't write a kag/kar fic because he's yours and no one elses. =/

good beginning, the interaction with kei/yus was very believable. i am curious what mess kagome finds herself in this time. well written.

thank you,
ginny