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Oh my, this is shaping up to be an amusing story lol I see things getting very interesting between Yusuke and Hiei if they're both chasing after the same girl. Kags and Keiko are shocking the hell out of me, the amount of chaos those two are going to cause is going to drive Yomi nuts. Couldn't happen to a nicer guy though, I like it. Can't wait to see just what you have planned.

Interesting, but how old are they? The girls are acting like a couple of 12-year-olds. I can't believe they just let Yomi send them to their rooms while he and "the gentlemen" discussed the mission. It has as much to do with them, if not MORE, than with the guys. I kind of like it that Kagome isn't dealing with Inuyasha's death yet -- it's going to hit her hard when she does. Are you thinking of throwing Kurama in with Keiko and Yomi? That might be cool. You could do two threesomes. I loved the hot kiss between Hiei and Kagome. And it was nice that even though he kind of blew her mind with it, she didn't let it show and still walloped him. I really like him going after her so aggressively. There's lots of potential in this one -- I'll look forward to more.

love it so...beyond words at this moment...Im really into this. I'll be FAITHFULLY here WAITING for the NEXT update. hope its SOON.

KURAMA/YUSUKE/HIEI/KAGOME PAIRING PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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KURAMA/YUSUKE
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KURAMA/KAGOME
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HIEI/KURAMA
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PAIRING PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!

AHHHH Keiko's joining forces with Yomi to take over the makai and Kurama's gay!!!! *continues reading* Damn well at least Kurama's still gay :P. Loving it update soon

Very, VERY interesting chapter!! But, what kind of training did Keiko do? She may have half the jewel in her, but she isn't a miko. She doesn't have any powers, right? So, did Genkai just help her learn how to fight? Kind of like Kuwabara withougt the Spirit Sword? I do hope this will focus more Kagome, though, than Keiko. The whole idea of Kagome wishing for the jewel to be in two pieces is very intriguing. I love her being Kuwabara's cousin, for a change, instead of Yusuke's. And I love the way you have Kuwabara and Yukina married and expecting. Nice. I am always, above anything else, a Hiei/Kagome fan, so naturally I have to root for him to get her. But I have to confess, the way you've written Yusuke's situation, I wouldn't mind seeing BOTH of them get her. I love the way Kagome dismissed Kurama, though. Heh heh! (Not that I don't like him, because I do, but, it was just funny.) Nice job of telling what happened with Naraku -- of course, I hate the idea that Kikyou was the one who killed him in the first place instead of Kagome, but then again, she obviously wasn't strong enough to really kill him, was she? And Inu should have loved Kag more. I like the way Kag dissed both Yusuke and Hiei. I love the way Hiei immediately made up his mind about her -- that seems like the kind of thing he would do to me. I can't wait to watch them both go after her. And like I said, I'm rooting for Hiei, but already I feel like it would be a shame for either one of them to lose. I can't wait for your next chapter!! This is going to be awesome!

Wow. That wasn't a twist I was expecting. I think this should be a kur/kag/hiei!!!! I LOVE that pairing!

Wonderful start! I hope to see more of this fic. I like Keiko but I don't like to see her with Yusuke. They aren't a good couple in my opinion. keep up the good work.

Sounds like a really good story so far and I can't wait to read more to see what happens next, so I hope you udpate asap please.

ooooohhh! that was very funny :)
I think it should be Yusuke/Kurama/Kagome!!!!
just because its hot, but if not either on with her makes me
very happy!!!! continue soon. yomi/keiko....ewwwww:O