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this is great update asap

Very cute, but I don't see Yomi keeping his six ears out of anything. I'm sure he is listening to every damn word being uttered. He's a man so he's going to be nosey. I just hope that if you make it a threesome that Yomi takes the front and Kurama takes the back in, cause if not, not even the jewel will repair the poor damage to Keiko's pucker. And I see a fight tween Yusuke and Hiei soon, both of them strike me as the jealous type when it comes down to a woman. They might try to control it at first but they are males regardless. All thinking is done south. Keep up the good work!

Really great progression here. Can't wait to see how everything works out.

great chapter. i really hope kagome ends up with hiei. the little hottie needs someone.

I like your story.
Yusuke/Kagome/Hiei isn´t my idea of a pairing because I´m one of the very, very few that doesn´t like Hiei paired up with anyone (please don´t kill me for that, but I don´t think a 4´10´´-guy can be very sexy and secondly I don´t like short hair, I know, I know, appearance isn´t everything, I just don´t think he is any sexier than Kuwabara, it´s only MY opinion, no offense).
But I think Yomi/Keiko/Kurama(I assume) makes up for it a thousand times. Thank you. I love Yomi and he is either evil or gay in almost every fic I read about him. Why would he NOT fit together with Keiko? I love this pairing. As for Keiko... I don´t know why so many readers don´t like her. Except for the miko powers Kagome and her are very similar, I think... So Keiko gets all the hot guys this time ;-) Why not?
Please just don´t turn any of the girls demon!!!
Please update soon!

I love the way this is progressing. Can't wait for more.

what about KURAMA!?

interesting story so far. im looking forward to reading more of it

Keep up the good job, you should try and make a kagome/yomi story just to see how it'll go.

I love the story, I think that the concept for it is fanastic. I especially love how Kagome and Keiko are a little out of their characters, but fot how I think that they would normally progress should these events have really taken place in the story line because of their human natures. Keep up the great work and update as much as you can, I can't get enough. Let us know whether or not Kagome's going to get Hiei, Yusuke, or both.

Best Wishes,
Selese