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for To Fall into Rut

by marcia

person Kya77
schedule May 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Well that's one awsome beginging. I look forward to seeing what comes next. Great job keep it up.
person Jessica
schedule May 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
story is good so far can't wait for the next chapter
schedule May 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
so far your story is quite interesting indeed. i really enjoyed reading this and i hope that u will continue with it.
person EvaR
schedule May 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love this story! And nice descriptions as well, Ungai is just as despicable as in the anime!! So, when are Kagome and Sesshomaru going to meet? I just can't wait to know what happens!
person Airy
schedule May 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I loved the first chapter and I can't wait to read th second one.
person DAZ306
schedule May 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
add soon
schedule May 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
It's a promissing pwp... but what demons (and animals in general) go trough is HEAT not rut... rut is the act in it self.. ahem...
You have good frase constrution and text coordination...
I'll be waiting for the next chappy ^^
**kisses**
Forfirith
schedule May 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
nice very nice i like this alot and i would love to read some more :D
person DAZ306
schedule May 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is realllllly good. Keep going!!
schedule May 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Looks great so far. Nicely written, and looks like a pretty decent plot to come. Creepy, evil monks. o.o Anyway, update soon!!!