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May 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
u should make the chapters longer
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May 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like this
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May 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh wow...this is interesting. I cant wait to read more. You should make longer chapters.
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April 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is really different and interesting. I just wish for a little longer chapters, other then that I like. Keep it up! :)