rate_review Reviews

hi! your story is good, but very hard to read... if you make some blank lines between the written ones it'll be much easier to read ;p

ok now listen...normally i would critisize people about the mistakes...but i can't i LOVED this story...it actually made me cry...it was beautiful! it was a great story...i would like to suggest one thing tho...maybe you should break in up into paragraphs...that way it is eaiser for people to read. Other than that it was GREAT!!! and the ironic thing was...my name is Katie...so i laughed so hard at that point....Keep up the good work...and i think that you should try a full length fan fiction story...you would be awesome at it....can't wait to see more from you...good job!