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for What a Mess

by razvanwink

person Lady Diamond
schedule April 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
all i have to say is H.O.T.T. update asap please!!
person Qiana
schedule April 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was so funny I love it keep it up.
person Anon
schedule April 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
UH OH!! poor Kagome
person Kags21
schedule April 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was perfect she is in so much trouble
schedule April 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Lmao! Sweet deal with Kagome slapping the hell out of him. ^^

Well, this story is definately amusing! I love the banter between them, and I'm hoping Sess might just lighten up a bit, before he kills Kagome from abusing his face. o.o lol
person Cassandra
schedule April 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
well what do you know, this story is readable! I hate running into a story that is difficult to read, and yours outstripes many I have read. Please continue for I will check often for updates! thanks
schedule April 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hahahaha, I love it so far. Poor Jaken, poor castle, and Rin and Kagome. But oh so funny! Please update soon!
person AmberEyez
schedule April 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
this is so --- yay. Just plain Yay.
minor note: "So long as it didn’t end with her grizzly demise" - that's grisly, unless of course you're being mauled in a horrible fashion by a grizzly bear. :-)

citation here: http://www.m-w.com/dictionary/grisly

person Anon
schedule April 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
AWWW thats it?! I want more!!
person Forfirith
schedule April 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
uhuh x3 *hentai thoughts*
Lemon lemon lemon!!

As the first, this chap was greatly written my dear... keep up the good work and update soon!
Kisses,
Forfirith