AFF Fiction Portal

rate_review Reviews

for What a Mess

by razvanwink

person Lady Diamond
schedule April 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
all i have to say is H.O.T.T. update asap please!!
person Qiana
schedule April 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was so funny I love it keep it up.
person Anon
schedule April 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
UH OH!! poor Kagome
person Kags21
schedule April 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was perfect she is in so much trouble
schedule April 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Lmao! Sweet deal with Kagome slapping the hell out of him. ^^

Well, this story is definately amusing! I love the banter between them, and I'm hoping Sess might just lighten up a bit, before he kills Kagome from abusing his face. o.o lol
person Cassandra
schedule April 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
well what do you know, this story is readable! I hate running into a story that is difficult to read, and yours outstripes many I have read. Please continue for I will check often for updates! thanks
schedule April 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hahahaha, I love it so far. Poor Jaken, poor castle, and Rin and Kagome. But oh so funny! Please update soon!
person AmberEyez
schedule April 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
this is so --- yay. Just plain Yay.
minor note: "So long as it didn’t end with her grizzly demise" - that's grisly, unless of course you're being mauled in a horrible fashion by a grizzly bear. :-)

citation here: http://www.m-w.com/dictionary/grisly

person Anon
schedule April 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
AWWW thats it?! I want more!!
person Forfirith
schedule April 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
uhuh x3 *hentai thoughts*
Lemon lemon lemon!!

As the first, this chap was greatly written my dear... keep up the good work and update soon!
Kisses,
Forfirith

Age Verification Required

This website contains adult content. You must be 18 years or older to access this site.

Are you 18 years of age or older?