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April 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
it would be funny if kagome walked in on sess bangin another chick! lol. btw update asap i loved it!
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April 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
man, I am enjoying this. I kept meaning to read it and kept forgetting, so glad I finally remembered! I haven't yet finished, but I'm sure I'll enjoy everything coming up as much as the stuff I've already read! I've been reading spark, but have to stop for a little while. Poor rin just got to me so much that I'm gonna have to let the angst inside die a little before I continue, but I know I'm going to some day, as it was so well written. This more light hearted humorous smut is exactly what I needed right now. Thank you!
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April 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hey again! I'm sure you're read lots of reviews like this one, but I really wanted to say that I loved "What a Mess" and it's the fanfic that I've laughed the most while reading! Seriously, the scene when Sesshoumaru throws meat at Kagome's head, I was like: "Oh gosh, he didn't! ... He did!! LOL!"
You've done a great job! And even if the characters where a bit... out of character, I still loved the way you've made them real. I laughed so much with their child fights! I never thought Sesshoumaru could turn out to be such a hilarious character. And the beach scene, when Kagome is shouting and ranting at nobody, it reminded me of Elizabeth Swan (in the POTC: Dead Man's Chest, dunno if you saw it) when she's shouting "ENOUGH! I'VE HAD IT!" at the three guys who are sword fighting, and nobody's listening to what she's saying. XD
What more can I say? Oh, thank you! Thank you so much for making my day with this fic. I don't know if you like Kouga x Kagome, but I'd love to read a fanfic of yours dedicated to that couple. I'll be waiting for the "Spark" update. Good luck with your novel! *hugs*
You've done a great job! And even if the characters where a bit... out of character, I still loved the way you've made them real. I laughed so much with their child fights! I never thought Sesshoumaru could turn out to be such a hilarious character. And the beach scene, when Kagome is shouting and ranting at nobody, it reminded me of Elizabeth Swan (in the POTC: Dead Man's Chest, dunno if you saw it) when she's shouting "ENOUGH! I'VE HAD IT!" at the three guys who are sword fighting, and nobody's listening to what she's saying. XD
What more can I say? Oh, thank you! Thank you so much for making my day with this fic. I don't know if you like Kouga x Kagome, but I'd love to read a fanfic of yours dedicated to that couple. I'll be waiting for the "Spark" update. Good luck with your novel! *hugs*
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April 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Awwwwwwwwww happy ending! fun story, too. Can't wait to read your next one!
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April 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Well thought out and very funny idea. I'm enjoying it for the laughs!
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April 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Loved it! ^.^ Poor Kagome having to travel inside a slug. o.O; At least it talked. lol
The cheering bush at the end had me giggling. Would make me paranoid, but still was funny. ^.^
The cheering bush at the end had me giggling. Would make me paranoid, but still was funny. ^.^
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April 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow
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April 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
this is great! looking forward to more:)
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April 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oh this is hilarious...
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April 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow... just... wow! I love it! Keep up the good work!