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for Coming of Age

by sootnsab

person nchsmi
schedule April 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really enjoyed this story! I can not wait to see what you will write next! B reading U
schedule April 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I read it, then re-read it. Fantastic! Okay, there are several spelling errors, but when you're reading and you're into the heat of the moment, you don't notice it as much. I wouldn't change any aspect of this story. Actually , I'm REALLY hoping that you add on to it and that you don't leave it as a one-shot. It's way to good to neglect. There aren't many Sess/Rin fics that are as well written as this one. I could see everything happen in my minds' eye while reading. Kudo's luv, cause it's worth it.
person animegirl007
schedule April 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Don't you dare change anything!!!!! It was wonderful....I can't wait to read your next Rin and Sesshomaru story....GREAT JOB!!!!!!!!!
person animegirl007
schedule April 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I forgot there were a few words spelled wrong, but you got the general idea....But, like I said before it was "EXCELLENT!!!"
person myname???
schedule April 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
kick ass story probably one of the best lemons with rin and Sesshomaru i've read lately. hope to hear more.
schedule April 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really enjoyed reading this. I could actually see this happening.

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