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oh wow this was like a friggin awesome!...
i think you should do a second part with them as adults
that would be sooo cool!!!!
great story!

i want to know what happens next.. with kagome vand the baby whether the asses finally get off their's

i absolutely loved this fic. kudos...please consider a story with them as adults.

Of coarse there should be a second part! I gotta see how it turns out...and I hope we get to see hiei's kid (hopefully a boy)

Yes you must write a second part to this story, just thinking that you wont make me all most cry. You can't leave a fantastic story like this go, with out people knowing what happens next. So please start doing the next part soon.

Okay. Just saw the last chapter up. I'm so sad! I hate to see it end. I DO love it that the guys all DID realize what fools they were. I liked the way you devoted a paragraph or two to each of them as they thought about it. I have to confess, though, that if you're thinking of doing a sequel, I'd rather see them a few months down the road instead of a few years. I just see a lot of potential in this summer's events and adventures. (And I don't want the guys to move on without them. Heck! I want a happy, romantic ending, darn it! And Hiei should have to change some of those diapers, too. Heh heh!) I absolutely loved Sango's farewell at the school -- nice touch! And Botan really did a number on Naraku's car. LOL!! I don't know if I mentioned before or not, but I really liked the way Kagome had started thinking about the baby, and the fact that she knew she loved Hiei and would love the baby, too -- even though she knew it was not all going to be fun or pleasant. I also liked it that she wasn't after Hiei to marry her -- she just wanted to be sure he loved her. Seriously, I'd love for the story to continue from here. Hiei SHOULD find out he fathered a baby before it's born. You know, something else I kept hoping to see, or at least THOUGHT we might see was a great little scene involving Hiei's job and Kagome's bad driving. I was waiting for you to spring an accident on us, with the car being towed to Hiei's place of work and him, and possibly the others, freaking out trying to find out if the girls were okay. At this point, I'd like to see Inuyasha and Yusuke maybe keep in touch with the girls or go out to see them while the other guys are still looking for them. Heck, I was even dreaming of the guys showing up just in time to hear Kouga pledge his love to Kagome and promise to take care of her and her baby. And considering Kurama's spreading his stuff around so much, I thought Sango should have a action going with someone else. Like I said, I was hoping to see Botan's eccentric aunt maybe send some young men their way, so the guys would have to really fight to get them back. You see, every chapter you wrote sent my imagination off in lots of different directions. You really did a fantastic job. This was an enthralling read. I'll definitely keep an eye out for anything else you write!

I loved this story! Please please please write about them as adults! There wasn't much closure for the girls, and there wasn't enough Kag/Yus. I'm hoping for a five or yen year reunion where the girls are happy. Boton maybe married...Sango dating and successful...Kagome getting together with Yusuke...Anyway, love the writing! It made my days better and told a great story.

Id like to see waht happens to Kagome and her baby and if they ever find happiness whether its with the boys or someone else.Please create a sepual.

I loved this story!! You really should continue with them as adults. So PLEASE PLEASE continue!!!!! I'll be looking for it.

Wow have loved every min of the read and I'm glad you finished it, but that's the end? o.O? I have been reading for a while, just not very good at the review thing. Got a nice surprise with all the last chapters at once.
I was kind of hoping the guys would give chase ... then when you added the cops the guys could use the cops to find them and then bail them out of jail. I know that a woman doesn't need to have a man to be happy and fulfilled ... blah... I would be happier though. Thank you so much for sharing. Please do write s'more I would love to read it.