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HEY I KNOW YOU MAYBE VERY BUSY BUT I WOULD LIKE TO KNOW WHEN WILLL YOU BE UPDATING THIS THRILLING FICTION. YOU HAVE ME IN SUSPENCE, EVERY DAY I CHECK TO SEE IF YOU HAVE UPDATED AND I GET REALLY DISSAPINTING BECAUSE YOU HAVEN'T. PLEASE DO SO SOON.
YOUR LOYAL FAN
KAREN

Please update soon i loved the highschool part nd can't wait to read the adult life part!!!

YAY!!!!!! When I saw you updated, with a new chapter no less, I literally bounced out of my seat. I really love your work! Please, keep writing, I would be so sad if you just stopped.

Oh nice.

Great to see a new chapter. Thanks so much for sharing.
You know, I'm wondering what the boys have been doing while the girls were away... How much do they really care about the girls? Have they even tried to get in touch with them? Curious minds want to know... Hey! I wants to knows!

I love crossovers and you have done an excellent job at bringing this one along at a believable pace. And now I gets to read more!!!

Oh yeah!
I bow to you oh great one!

"I am not worthy! I am not worthy!" rofl
man this story is great! Seriously, and then you
just jump into the sequel, like BAM! lol
Man, you sooo gotta keep this going, this story is
one of the best cross-overs I'ved ever read!

^_~

My heart is still broken from the way the first installment ended *sobs*, but this chapter peaked my interest. Good job. Post soon.

10 out 0f 10 for With Love
I am so glad that you continued to write this story. I never thought botan would get married... oh well i can't wait to see what other twists and turns your story may take. I am looking forward to the next chapter.

Hmmm. Very interesting. Six years later and all three of the girls are single. The guys had better be, too. And Hiei had better NOT have married or had any kids with anyone else since he was so deadset against it. I like the intervening history you came up with for Botan and Sango. It makes sense that they would have married. I can't believe Kagome didn't. I love it that Botan married KOENMA -- that was hilarious. (Of course I love it twice as much because she kicked him to the curb. And he got nothing.) You really surprised me with Sango having twins. I was sure her appointment had something to do with a job, rather than her being pregnant. Love it that Yusuke saw Youko and thought he must be Inuyasha's. THAT'S good thinking on YOUR part. I have to confess, in the first story, I was all set for a Hiei/Kagome/Yusuke threesome, but you played out the Hiei/Kagome part so incredibly well without incorporationg Yusuke in it at all until that little bit towards the end, that I really don't like the idea any more. Actually, I'd rather see Yusuke with Botan. And I'd much rather see the angst and uncertainty all on the part of the guys this time around. I like it that Kagome isn't interested in whether or not Hiei is still around. Six years have passed. Six years of being responsible adults/parents. By now, those guys are just high school fluff. They've had many, many more important things to deal with, and should have had relationships that meant more to them, being older and wiser. BUT, I'm hoping the guys DIDN'T get into anything serious in the intervening years, (even though realistically they would have), and I want to see them do some serious chasing. And give the girls some other choices. You've already set it out that their kids aren't going to accept anyone else. That seems unfair, since the guys didn't have any little people wrecking their lovelife for the last 6 years. Throw me a bone here!

I'm glad that you decided to continue with this story. I can see now that it is only going to get better. The guys are going to freak when they see the girls are back in town. How are they going to find out? This is going to be sooo good! Please keep updating.

I know I already posted on this chap, but on the way home Hinder was on the radio and I immediatley thought of this fanfic. Sango/Kurama the part about "that time at the mall, me and you in the dressing room" A new angsty idea hit me. I can just see it now. Yuske tells Kurama about Youko cause he hasn't seen Shippo yet and Kurama somehow finds out the birthday and figures up that Sango got pregnant while dating him so she must have cheated on him with Inuyasha and goes off on her over it blah blah blah. Of course I'm sure I'm probably wrong since you always suprise me. And the message again at the end. Does Yuske go to Sango's, Kagome's, one of the guys, the blonde chics, hhhmmm and does Yukina actually spill some beans or does she let something slip out while talking?