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by LadyShinomori

person KNK00232
schedule June 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Woooo! Go Yusuke! LMAO at Kurama. What an idiot. I love the fact that Youko has already decided he doesn't want Shizura either. Oh this is gonna be so good. And thank you, thank you for finally giving Sango someone worth her while. At least I'm hoping Touya is. Just wondering if Youko and Shippou will accept it though. And I am so looking forward to Sango and Kurama when they get face to face. Oh please let Sango hand his ass to him. Not to mention Kagome handing Hiei his. And I almost forgot about the blonde in the first chapter of this part. When will that be coming into play? And when do we get more Botan action? Again, thanks for such a great read.
schedule June 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Once again you have made it so that I don't like Kurama. You are good. Of course, I don't think any man would believe it if some woman came to him saying he had kids. But once looking at them it is obvious. He is going to feel so bad. Ha Ha Ha! I love the way this story is going. Please keep writing. I can't wait for the next chapter.
person Anon
schedule June 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That's just great. I can't wait to see what he has to say for himself. Serves him right for being an asshole. I wanted more than a kiss between Kagome and Yusuke. He should have let her taste the cock. keep up the good work
person hieikag
schedule June 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
thanks for continuing
person White Kitsune Shiva
schedule June 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wow
person Patty530
schedule June 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter. I think your doing a great job. My heart is not so broken.now. *sigh* LOL. Love this story, and I'm hopeful about Sango and Kurama.
person madmiko
schedule June 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Very interesting chapter. So, Naraku never got rid of Kagura and now she's pregnant. I can't believe he brought Botan the bill! LOL!! Loved her comment about his wife and the coal! It's been kind of funny seeing who is meeting up with whom. Hiei approached Sango, but she won't go near Kurama, and vice versa, and he hasn't even tried to see Kagome yet. Yusuke, on the other hand, jumped right in and has been around both of them. And Naraku went for it, even though he's even more tangled up in his marriage than before. But, Hiei is considering going to the bar to see Kagome, huh? I can't wait for that!! But he may find himself struggling to catch up with Yusuke since he's dragging his feet. And when he and Kurama both find out that they're daddies -- heh heh! It's going to be priceless! You know, I have to say, I liked Midoriko mentioning that she hadn't liked Kagome's last boyfriend, because I've still been thinking how nice it would be to see some of the other male characters come for the girls, and I think Kouga would make an excellent stalker following Kagome to her hometown. It would give Yusuke a chance to play hero since he's a cop, if Kouga got threatening or violent. Heck, it would give Hiei a chance, too, since he lives so near her house -- he could see the guy slinking around the neighborhood. Oh! And I liked the way Sango asked about Hiei's wife, since she has to know from Yukina that he isn't married. And he just ignored her. Very Hiei-like. But he mentioned her husband, and found out she's divorced. That's one thing Yukina didn't mention -- whether or not Kagome was married. And Hiei didn't ask. I'm betting he assumes she WAS married, since that's what he tossed her aside so she could do. I really can't wait for all this great stuff to come out!
person KNK00232
schedule June 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Another great chapter. I like were it's going so far. And I got to say I love the new, improved Botan. You go girl! They all three have grown and matured and I can't wait till Sango and Kagome tell the fox and Hiei off. Please tell me thats coming. And I'm not going to try and guess about the popcorn, puppies or the surprise. Though I'm hoping it's a big surprise.
person Anon
schedule June 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
woo awesome! go girls!! haha
person Patty530
schedule June 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Another great chapter. Poor Yusuke. You've got a real winner here. keep it up. Can't wait for the next chapter.